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They see who they think i am
But im lieing
Im dying
Screaming out for someone to hear me
Crying out for someone to help me

Hiding behind a perfect smile, and fake laugh
Everyone thinks im in this world with no night
Surrounded by light
They dont know

Im in darkness, so cold, so alone
So in Pain, killing me slowly
I know there are people who care
But it doesnt seem enough,
To break me out of this spell of depression

Now i want to give up
Starting to not care how much pain it will cause anyone else
Im so selfish
Im becoming dead inside
And no one can see me
Im so invisible, unwanted

How can nobody see me?
They wont notice if im gone
Forever i will live a dream
Not connected to this world
Because i have died inside

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Dead Emotions

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 05:00:26 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

no one can see through this lie i live,
They see who they think i am
But im lieing
Im dying
Screaming out for someone to hear me
Crying out for someone to help me

Hiding behind a perfect smile, and fake laugh
Everyone thinks im in this world with no night
Surrounded by light
They dont know

Im in darkness, so cold, so alone
So in Pain, killing me slowly
I know there are people who care
But it doesnt seem enough,
To break me out of this spell of depression

Now i want to give up
Starting to not care how much pain it will cause anyone else
Im so selfish
Im becoming dead inside
And no one can see me
Im so invisible, unwanted

How can nobody see me?
They wont notice if im gone
Forever i will live a dream
Not connected to this world
Because i have died inside

Copyright © willow_tara72002 ... [ 2004-09-21 17:00:26]
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Re: Dead Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 05:09:38 PM AEST
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emotional and interesting write. lies are not the cries of help you need to be giving then if they arent heard.

Re: Dead Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 02:48:56 AM AEST
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awesome

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