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Array ( [sid] => 64625 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rescue me from this pain [time] => 2004-09-21 15:17:33 [hometext] => i is so sickies of bein alone -_- o well..... [bodytext] => Tears flow down my face, then dissapear with the falling rain,
The tears of all of this sadness, the tears of all of this pain,
Im sick of walking alone, but there's nothing that I can do,
I can't force you to think differently, or look at me like I look at you,
I wish that I could change some things, and be the person you adore,
You would love me and cherish me forever, wish you could love me more,
I always get stuck with being "just friends" with the people I fall in love with,
Every person that I have to let go of, each one of them become a myth,
Can you see the pain in my eyes, the feelings that go untouched,
I just want to be loved by another, but I guess that's just too much,
I have so much to offer, but every day it just goes un-noticed,
Every choice I seem to make, turns out to be the wrongest,
So I guess I'll continue to walk, in the cold, bitter, lonely rain,
If you want to, please save me, and rescue me from this pain.





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Rescue me from this pain

Contributed by XxNights_ChildxX on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 03:17:33 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Tears flow down my face, then dissapear with the falling rain,
The tears of all of this sadness, the tears of all of this pain,
Im sick of walking alone, but there's nothing that I can do,
I can't force you to think differently, or look at me like I look at you,
I wish that I could change some things, and be the person you adore,
You would love me and cherish me forever, wish you could love me more,
I always get stuck with being "just friends" with the people I fall in love with,
Every person that I have to let go of, each one of them become a myth,
Can you see the pain in my eyes, the feelings that go untouched,
I just want to be loved by another, but I guess that's just too much,
I have so much to offer, but every day it just goes un-noticed,
Every choice I seem to make, turns out to be the wrongest,
So I guess I'll continue to walk, in the cold, bitter, lonely rain,
If you want to, please save me, and rescue me from this pain.









Copyright © XxNights_ChildxX ... [ 2004-09-21 15:17:33]
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Re: Rescue me from this pain (User Rating: 1 )
by xfrozenwindx on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 04:45:25 PM AEST
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Wow that was really good.
I hate that feeling, it sucks out loud!
I doubt I will ever actually fall in love
and have them actually love me back.
But hey, you never know when things
could turn around. See ya lata!
- Ashley -


Re: Rescue me from this pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Alovinmann on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 04:46:32 PM AEST
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I understand this "Let's be friends " thing oh so well THANKS


Re: Rescue me from this pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 06:27:32 PM AEST
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I understand it oh too well too, all the guys i ever fell in love lately just wanted to by my friends too i hate it. I dont think ill ever fall in love.


Re: Rescue me from this pain (User Rating: 1 )
by bebe20071 on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 06:40:05 PM AEST
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I know how that feels somethings. It readlly does suck big time. ~ _~ oh well.
very nice job.




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