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Array ( [sid] => 64572 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Invisible Scars [time] => 2004-09-21 08:23:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Scars that you cannot see
Cover my entire body
Inside I'm torn
Outside I'm broken

Invisible scars
On every inch of skin
If you turn out the light
You'll see them shine

They'll twinkle like my tears
That gather at the corners of my eyes
Watch as they slide down my cheeks
I'm ripped in pieces

Love is a gruesome fate
I'll never fall again
I've fallen as far as I could
Love is a deviant being

Invisible scars
They'll never heal
I've tried so hard to heal them on my own
I'm a failure...a pitiful failure

Don't look at me
My body is scared
My heart is scared
& it's all my fault [comments] => 4 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 22 [informant] => RhythmBndt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Invisible Scars

Contributed by RhythmBndt on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 08:23:05 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Scars that you cannot see
Cover my entire body
Inside I'm torn
Outside I'm broken

Invisible scars
On every inch of skin
If you turn out the light
You'll see them shine

They'll twinkle like my tears
That gather at the corners of my eyes
Watch as they slide down my cheeks
I'm ripped in pieces

Love is a gruesome fate
I'll never fall again
I've fallen as far as I could
Love is a deviant being

Invisible scars
They'll never heal
I've tried so hard to heal them on my own
I'm a failure...a pitiful failure

Don't look at me
My body is scared
My heart is scared
& it's all my fault

Copyright © RhythmBndt ... [ 2004-09-21 08:23:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Invisible Scars (User Rating: 1 )
by mylastwords on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 08:28:33 AM AEST
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beautiful expressive write...
i have the scars too...although mine aren't just emotional...
love is the best and worst thing in life...when you lose someone you love...words cannot explain...
xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx

Re: Invisible Scars (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent_Composer on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 08:47:32 AM AEST
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Beautifully written with very vivid emtions...
I am sorry for the pain you are going through and hope you find the healing you wish for.
Take Care

~Silence~

Re: Invisible Scars (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 11:06:25 AM AEST
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its never your fault
love is how it is
end or beginning its all beautiful and beauty comes with pain
every tree has a splinter
great write :)
love han xx

Re: Invisible Scars (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 11:17:12 AM AEST
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a very beautiful and very sad write, greatly mixed together to create this masterpiece of writing

pixie xx

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