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Array ( [sid] => 64531 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tears Are So Hollow [time] => 2004-09-20 21:27:11 [hometext] => Thank you for reading... [bodytext] => Have you ever left me? I can say "No"
You follow me everywhere that I go
Is it myself, what makes you last?
I cut deep and I still feel the past

You've taken me farther than I ever planned to ride
Your pulse pries at the wound inside
I cannot help it, I feel so alive
During the seconds you seem to die...

Take me farther in
I'd like something real for this fake sin
Close your eyes and just pretend
That all the hurt is gone, and this is the end

My face is so wet but the tears are so hollow
Emotions set in and I can't help but follow
I'm sick of this rhythm and all of the beatings
You're fine I trust, too pretty for seething

I filter your conscious over and over
And yet somehow you still look over my shoulder
I stare forward and dream away
For the moments where you're at bay...

Take me farther in
I'd like something real for this fake sin
Close your eyes and just pretend
That all the hurt is gone, and this is the end

If there's something I've learned
Besides the feeling of someone lettting you burn
It seems to scream to be
The simple truth about trust and honesty

With honesty comes trust
But trust alone brings lies
WITH HONESTY COMES TRUST
BUT TRUST ALONE BRINGS LIES

I can still feel them breathing on my eyes
All the venom and **** I despise
I just inhale and wait for the times
Where your presence is absent inside...

Take me farther in
I'd like something real for this fake sin
Close your eyes and just pretend
That all the hurt is gone, and this is the end [comments] => 7 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 48 [informant] => sicknivesevered [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Tears Are So Hollow

Contributed by sicknivesevered on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 09:27:11 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Have you ever left me? I can say "No"
You follow me everywhere that I go
Is it myself, what makes you last?
I cut deep and I still feel the past

You've taken me farther than I ever planned to ride
Your pulse pries at the wound inside
I cannot help it, I feel so alive
During the seconds you seem to die...

Take me farther in
I'd like something real for this fake sin
Close your eyes and just pretend
That all the hurt is gone, and this is the end

My face is so wet but the tears are so hollow
Emotions set in and I can't help but follow
I'm sick of this rhythm and all of the beatings
You're fine I trust, too pretty for seething

I filter your conscious over and over
And yet somehow you still look over my shoulder
I stare forward and dream away
For the moments where you're at bay...

Take me farther in
I'd like something real for this fake sin
Close your eyes and just pretend
That all the hurt is gone, and this is the end

If there's something I've learned
Besides the feeling of someone lettting you burn
It seems to scream to be
The simple truth about trust and honesty

With honesty comes trust
But trust alone brings lies
WITH HONESTY COMES TRUST
BUT TRUST ALONE BRINGS LIES

I can still feel them breathing on my eyes
All the venom and **** I despise
I just inhale and wait for the times
Where your presence is absent inside...

Take me farther in
I'd like something real for this fake sin
Close your eyes and just pretend
That all the hurt is gone, and this is the end




Copyright © sicknivesevered ... [ 2004-09-20 21:27:11]
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Re: Tears Are So Hollow (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 09:46:25 PM AEST
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I liked this ...quite a lot actually.


Re: Tears Are So Hollow (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 10:40:14 PM AEST
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this was awesome I liked the longing in this
poem. I really like the title it was responsible
for me reading the poem and this line, "Your
pulse pries at the wound inside" just spoke
volumes to me. Awesome poem.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Tears Are So Hollow (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 10:48:07 PM AEST
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WOW!!! I like this... it says quite alot here... and with alot of emotion that's heatfelt...
Great write... keep it up!
~Donna~


Re: Tears Are So Hollow (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 12:44:43 AM AEST
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Vivid and painful. I hope someday you find someone worthy of trust. Almost impossible, but one of the most meaningful things that can happen to us, I think.

Take care. Follow the Light.

Andrew


Re: Tears Are So Hollow (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 04:30:55 AM AEST
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awesome


Re: Tears Are So Hollow (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonOrgazm on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:00:42 PM AEST
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i really like this one. it's definately one of my favorites that i've read. this is my favorite part.. "My face is so wet but the tears are so hollow
Emotions set in and I can't help but follow
I'm sick of this rhythm and all of the beatings
You're fine I trust, too pretty for seething"

=)


Re: Tears Are So Hollow (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 01:33:28 PM AEST
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Reading this, with the arguing of my parents in the background was...soothing.
Thanks




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