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Array ( [sid] => 64524 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Brokenhearted [time] => 2004-09-20 20:50:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I say this with a smile,
to prove to you that I'm not in denial.
Please forgive me for what I've done this time.
I always need you when your not mine.
I cared too much,
and pushed too hard.
I didn't want to let it get this far.
I'm sorry for what I said,
for making you who you are today.
I beg and plead for you to stay.
I love you dearly,
like a precious jewel.
Your in my heart forever.... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Sirena_Degana [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Brokenhearted

Contributed by Sirena_Degana on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 08:50:12 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I say this with a smile,
to prove to you that I'm not in denial.
Please forgive me for what I've done this time.
I always need you when your not mine.
I cared too much,
and pushed too hard.
I didn't want to let it get this far.
I'm sorry for what I said,
for making you who you are today.
I beg and plead for you to stay.
I love you dearly,
like a precious jewel.
Your in my heart forever....

Copyright © Sirena_Degana ... [ 2004-09-20 20:50:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Brokenhearted (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 08:55:19 PM AEST
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amazing write. kind of gives me one of those foreign feelings of love. this reminded me of one of innerbeautyqueens statue of a girl, because of some of the concept in this. keep up the great work as usual =]

Re: Brokenhearted (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 09:21:23 PM AEST
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beautifully sweet:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Brokenhearted (User Rating: 1 )
by europeanprincess on Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 12:32:20 PM AEST
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Although I have not lost in death the one i still love --- i really feel this one--- so true in every way--why do we hole that one person in our heart for so long? why do we put ourself through it if he or she will not come back to us? its hard to love. thank you for this one poem it was really good.

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