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Array ( [sid] => 64517 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => one more can't hurt... [time] => 2004-09-20 19:55:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Tripping all over myself
i try to think,
but all my thoughts blend,
stirring inside,
making them come to
me slowly and painfully.
The images around me
are deformed and
unfamilar.
i can't control myself--
its impossible to move
without feeling nauseous.
i can't tell if i'm awake,
or some where never
to be bothered again.
Sleeping sounds like
paradise.
But still i can't stop myself
from taking that one last
swallow of my poisonous treat.

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one more can't hurt...

Contributed by brown_eyez_ on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 07:55:12 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

Tripping all over myself
i try to think,
but all my thoughts blend,
stirring inside,
making them come to
me slowly and painfully.
The images around me
are deformed and
unfamilar.
i can't control myself--
its impossible to move
without feeling nauseous.
i can't tell if i'm awake,
or some where never
to be bothered again.
Sleeping sounds like
paradise.
But still i can't stop myself
from taking that one last
swallow of my poisonous treat.

Copyright © brown_eyez_ ... [ 2004-09-20 19:55:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: one more can't hurt... (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 08:10:57 PM AEST
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thats what we all seem to think...there's no way around it...great poem bro

please comment on my work too
summer

Re: one more can't hurt... (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 09:06:53 PM AEST
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great write. cant say much more without ranting why you shouldnt drink, heh.

Re: one more can't hurt... (User Rating: 1 )
by Cenon on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:28:54 PM AEST
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Not a bad write i enjoyed reading it. It makes me think of bad memories....heh. Very descriptive i especially liked "The Images around me are deformed and unfamiliar." Great Job please comment on my work too.
Cenon (i only have like 3 poems they are in fantasy humorous and no topic sections just so you know)

Re: one more can't hurt... (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 05:56:17 AM AEST
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awesome

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