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Array ( [sid] => 64422 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A unnecessary force [time] => 2004-09-20 04:23:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I remember
I was walking on the road
To my home looking around
And my eyes
Felt on the wrong place
At the wrong time
I gave everything I had
But yet that was not enough
And then at a moment
Everything was black
And here and there
I saw a thing or two
And heard a little of this and that
And finally I awoke
And a bright light shined
In to my eyes
I looked around
And I saw
I was in a hospital
I could still feel
The unnecessary pain
On my body
So hard and so rough
It came up on me
Why did they do it
What had I done to them
I do not known
Why is life
So hard and so rough
Well I guess
That answer only God knows
For He is the creator of all
So to of evil
And of the Devil
So I must thank Him
Of being here
Or maybe not Him
But the fates
And God cannot say
To the fates what to do
For He does not have
Power over them
So why does people say
It is the devils fault
While He created all
Still it is the devils fault
Or it is just a fairytale
Made up by man to think
Someone or something
Is protecting them
But none can tell
For through time
It has been forgotten
Somewhat the same
With me
They have done it
And soon it will
Be forgotten
Yet the mark
Will always stay
Just like someone
Said God exist
And the mark stayed
Yet the doctors
Do not notice me awake
Or my body does not work
So good as it ones did
Maybe it is the eyes
Of my soul who are watching
My surroundings
Yet for everything
Is a mystery
For why someone
Is doing it
For even the most
Wised of man cannot tell all
What happeneds in
The world.
I remember
I was walking on the road
To my home looking around
And my eyes
Felt on the wrong place
At the wrong time
I gave everything I had
But yet that was not enough
And then at a moment
Everything was black
And here and there
I saw a thing or two
And heard a little of this and that
And finally I awoke
And a bright light shined
In to my eyes
I looked around
And I saw
I was in a hospital
I could still feel
The unnecessary pain
On my body
So hard and so rough
It came up on me
Why did they do it
What had I done to them
I do not known
Why is life
So hard and so rough
Well I guess
That answer only God knows
For He is the creator of all
So to of evil
And of the Devil
So I must thank Him
Of being here
Or maybe not Him
But the fates
And God cannot say
To the fates what to do
For He does not have
Power over them
So why does people say
It is the devils fault
While He created all
Still it is the devils fault
Or it is just a fairytale
Made up by man to think
Someone or something
Is protecting them
But none can tell
For through time
It has been forgotten
Somewhat the same
With me
They have done it
And soon it will
Be forgotten
Yet the mark
Will always stay
Just like someone
Said God exist
And the mark stayed
Yet the doctors
Do not notice me awake
Or my body does not work
So good as it ones did
Maybe it is the eyes
Of my soul who are watching
My surroundings
Yet for everything
Is a mystery
For why someone
Is doing it
For even the most
Wised of man cannot tell all
What happeneds in
The world.
A unnecessary force
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A unnecessary force

Contributed by naijerana on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 04:23:22 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I remember
I was walking on the road
To my home looking around
And my eyes
Felt on the wrong place
At the wrong time
I gave everything I had
But yet that was not enough
And then at a moment
Everything was black
And here and there
I saw a thing or two
And heard a little of this and that
And finally I awoke
And a bright light shined
In to my eyes
I looked around
And I saw
I was in a hospital
I could still feel
The unnecessary pain
On my body
So hard and so rough
It came up on me
Why did they do it
What had I done to them
I do not known
Why is life
So hard and so rough
Well I guess
That answer only God knows
For He is the creator of all
So to of evil
And of the Devil
So I must thank Him
Of being here
Or maybe not Him
But the fates
And God cannot say
To the fates what to do
For He does not have
Power over them
So why does people say
It is the devils fault
While He created all
Still it is the devils fault
Or it is just a fairytale
Made up by man to think
Someone or something
Is protecting them
But none can tell
For through time
It has been forgotten
Somewhat the same
With me
They have done it
And soon it will
Be forgotten
Yet the mark
Will always stay
Just like someone
Said God exist
And the mark stayed
Yet the doctors
Do not notice me awake
Or my body does not work
So good as it ones did
Maybe it is the eyes
Of my soul who are watching
My surroundings
Yet for everything
Is a mystery
For why someone
Is doing it
For even the most
Wised of man cannot tell all
What happeneds in
The world.
I remember
I was walking on the road
To my home looking around
And my eyes
Felt on the wrong place
At the wrong time
I gave everything I had
But yet that was not enough
And then at a moment
Everything was black
And here and there
I saw a thing or two
And heard a little of this and that
And finally I awoke
And a bright light shined
In to my eyes
I looked around
And I saw
I was in a hospital
I could still feel
The unnecessary pain
On my body
So hard and so rough
It came up on me
Why did they do it
What had I done to them
I do not known
Why is life
So hard and so rough
Well I guess
That answer only God knows
For He is the creator of all
So to of evil
And of the Devil
So I must thank Him
Of being here
Or maybe not Him
But the fates
And God cannot say
To the fates what to do
For He does not have
Power over them
So why does people say
It is the devils fault
While He created all
Still it is the devils fault
Or it is just a fairytale
Made up by man to think
Someone or something
Is protecting them
But none can tell
For through time
It has been forgotten
Somewhat the same
With me
They have done it
And soon it will
Be forgotten
Yet the mark
Will always stay
Just like someone
Said God exist
And the mark stayed
Yet the doctors
Do not notice me awake
Or my body does not work
So good as it ones did
Maybe it is the eyes
Of my soul who are watching
My surroundings
Yet for everything
Is a mystery
For why someone
Is doing it
For even the most
Wised of man cannot tell all
What happeneds in
The world.
A unnecessary force

Copyright © naijerana ... [ 2004-09-20 04:23:22]
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