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Array ( [sid] => 64417 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All Seasons' Love [time] => 2004-09-20 02:48:21 [hometext] => Enjoy! Hugs, Hur [bodytext] => As this summer heads for a fall
And the leaves answer to autumn's call
Then the memories of our forgotten love,
Fluttering around like a wounded dove
Whisper for my wee attention
For what's past, without redemption

Like a flame, quenched with a sigh
It's faint remains ascending high
So did our love, like blown up clay
Without a sound, just fade away
It's energy flew from the core
Unnoticed, till there was no more

With no thoughts of you left in store
So many months we've been apart
That I can't recall anymore
The rhythm of your beating heart

I watch into the speckled night
The meaning of love seems yet so far
As I can't get the feeling right
I'm praying for a wishing star

When this winter's chased off by spring
And all long quiet birds start to sing
Will we then dig up from the past
All seasons' love and make it last? [comments] => 7 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Hurretje [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 44 [ratings] => 9 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

All Seasons' Love

Contributed by Hurretje on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 02:48:21 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

As this summer heads for a fall
And the leaves answer to autumn's call
Then the memories of our forgotten love,
Fluttering around like a wounded dove
Whisper for my wee attention
For what's past, without redemption

Like a flame, quenched with a sigh
It's faint remains ascending high
So did our love, like blown up clay
Without a sound, just fade away
It's energy flew from the core
Unnoticed, till there was no more

With no thoughts of you left in store
So many months we've been apart
That I can't recall anymore
The rhythm of your beating heart

I watch into the speckled night
The meaning of love seems yet so far
As I can't get the feeling right
I'm praying for a wishing star

When this winter's chased off by spring
And all long quiet birds start to sing
Will we then dig up from the past
All seasons' love and make it last?

Copyright Â© Hurretje ... [ 2004-09-20 02:48:21]
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Re: All Seasons' Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 03:19:56 AM AEST
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Another beautiful write.

wildejohnny.

Re: All Seasons' Love (User Rating: 1 )
by WinterFawn on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 03:59:49 AM AEST
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I love the last verse and how you ended with a question. This is a beautiful poem that I enjoyed very much.

WinterFawn

Re: All Seasons' Love (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 05:42:10 AM AEST
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Beautiful delighful poem. The way the themes of love & seasons migled together formed a lovly picture. Very sweet endearing write.

Corinna

Re: All Seasons' Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:54:30 AM AEST
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Hur, this is quite a beautiful if not sad piece of work. Sometimes it seems seasons change overnight in matters of the heart.

Rita

Re: All Seasons' Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 02:15:36 AM AEST
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Deeply meaningful. You capture these feelings wonderfully. And here I am reading, using one admiring adjective after another, for there is little else I can say. The flow, the language, the themes, are simply excellent. The themes especially. I think that aspect of your latest works has come home to me most.

Slàn

Andrew

Re: All Seasons' Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 11:08:28 PM AEST
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amazing write, so gentle and moving, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: All Seasons' Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 09:45:58 AM AEST
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Hur, this was such a beautifully written piece. What a splendid picture you have painted. *S* Cynthia

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