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[aid] => mick
[title] => BUT I DON'T CARE
[time] => 2004-09-20 02:09:34
[hometext] => for u Tony
[bodytext] =>  
:: RAINz SIGz ::
Fantasy is cool, so cool dear.
I wonna hold u close, so near.
No one else could eva move me.
You have me dancing, floating free.
Car is broke but I don't care
Call me home body, I'm aware.
but I'd walk jus say the word.
This loneliness is absurd.
Gotta feel your gentle embrace
so we can trip off in space.
Miles want keep us apart
'cause this luv matter of hearts.
Fear trys to stubbernly rule.
Jus can't stop my luv 4 u.
He no longer lives in my heart
'cause u came with cupids dart.
4 eva luv,
emystar
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BUT I DON'T CARE
Contributed by
emystar
on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 02:09:34 AM in AEST
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:: RAINz SIGz ::
Fantasy is cool, so cool dear.
I wonna hold u close, so near.
No one else could eva move me.
You have me dancing, floating free.
Car is broke but I don't care
Call me home body, I'm aware.
but I'd walk jus say the word.
This loneliness is absurd.
Gotta feel your gentle embrace
so we can trip off in space.
Miles want keep us apart
'cause this luv matter of hearts.
Fear trys to stubbernly rule.
Jus can't stop my luv 4 u.
He no longer lives in my heart
'cause u came with cupids dart.
4 eva luv,
emystar
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Re: BUT I DON'T CARE
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 02:12:17 AM AEST
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another, heartfelt write you are so good at this type of poetry.
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Re: BUT I DON'T CARE
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by bernard on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 02:30:06 AM AEST
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| Absolutely lovely Emy, You certainly do have a lot of love in your heart, I am pleased for Tony. Hugs and love from bernard. |
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Re: BUT I DON'T CARE
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 02:47:53 AM AEST
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| Whoever Tony is, I hope he fulfills all your dreams ... another inspiring write, my friend, hugs Jan |
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Re: BUT I DON'T CARE
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 02:49:59 AM AEST
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Sweet, romantic, dreaming...drifting me off to another place (especially with the music).
Great work, as always.
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: BUT I DON'T CARE
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 05:16:50 PM AEST
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Very romantic...lovely music and pic....
You've got it all here, grrlfriend...
Luv & Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: BUT I DON'T CARE
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 01:28:39 AM AEST
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Oh Emy you out did yourself with this most lovely write dear! It's so like you...........I just loved reading it and feeling your heart's desire!
How I pray all of this comes true for you....you deserve it so much!!!
Love
momconsue |
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Re: BUT I DON'T CARE
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by Rose on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 10:36:42 AM AEST
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How lovely this write is my dear Emy. I only know this love dart so well. It enstilled, still into my heart for my love. I wish you all the desire of this write, and hope it can work for you. You do deserve so much of a true gent.
Amber Rose Yeager :) |
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Re: BUT I DON'T CARE
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:40:31 PM AEST
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| Lovely write. |
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Re: BUT I DON'T CARE
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 09:00:26 PM AEST
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| Oh Emy, this was beautiful. I love the picture. This write goes to heart. Nicely done. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: BUT I DON'T CARE
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by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:59:45 PM AEST
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Sure hoped you showed him this write,powerful from a lovely heart ! I appreciated reading this,
PumpkinPie |
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Re: BUT I DON'T CARE
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:57:50 PM AEST
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Awww love is such a magical entity that leaves us feeling breathless. I took from your poem that you have realized what is important in life and what isn't worth worrying about.
I hope love will heal you, awaken you and fill all your empty spots. I wish you the absolute best.
The girl in the photo was incredibly lovely as well.
Kie |
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Re: BUT I DON'T CARE
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 12:27:07 PM AEST
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I like this emy being a song writter my self i picked up on the soulful strutting pace this induces into the reader, kind of like a bobby gentry Ode to Billy Joe feel. you got it going on girl, keep up the great work, love your usage of the slur and slang in your words also.
((((emystar))))
Ben |
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