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Array ( [sid] => 64391 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Retarded [time] => 2004-09-19 21:26:31 [hometext] => i dunno, i just feel retarded right now....so i wrote a poem..please comment! [bodytext] => my mind
set a blank
wishing to do nothing
but sit on my computer chair
and swivle about
swivle
swivle
turn
turn
while drool
trickles down my lips
as i stare off into space
into nothingness
drool
drool
blink
blink
shall i rock back and forth
muttering nonsense words
gnaw off the skin around my finger tips
then giggle gaily to myself
"Honey,honey,honey,honey,honey"
the chair turns
swivle
swivle
turn
turn
"Hee hee hee"
eyes glazed over
drool
drool
blink
blink
mind
set a blank
is this what its like to be retarded? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 59 [informant] => TwEeK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )

Retarded

Contributed by TwEeK on Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 09:26:31 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

my mind
set a blank
wishing to do nothing
but sit on my computer chair
and swivle about
swivle
swivle
turn
turn
while drool
trickles down my lips
as i stare off into space
into nothingness
drool
drool
blink
blink
shall i rock back and forth
muttering nonsense words
gnaw off the skin around my finger tips
then giggle gaily to myself
"Honey,honey,honey,honey,honey"
the chair turns
swivle
swivle
turn
turn
"Hee hee hee"
eyes glazed over
drool
drool
blink
blink
mind
set a blank
is this what its like to be retarded?

Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-09-19 21:26:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Retarded (User Rating: 1 )
by AnastasiaN on Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 11:25:36 PM AEST
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i'm not sure but you fit the stereotype well...you must really know what it feels like to be an idiot tho....retarded is so politically incorrect, and you're completely ignorant.

Re: Retarded (User Rating: 1 )
by tears_of_blood on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 03:57:11 AM AEST
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MAN THIS POEM YOU DID WAS DUM LIKE I HAVE A BROTHER AND HES HANDYCAP AND YOU KNOW NOTHING ABOUT PEOPLE LIKE HIM.

Re: Retarded (User Rating: 1 )
by TwEeK on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 01:41:10 PM AEST
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thank you for your constructive criticism.
now ill remind myself not to do poems that may offend someone.
i didnt meen for the poem to sound the way it did. that was just the way I felt at the time, i didnt meen it for anyone else.
im so sorry if this poem may have offended you.
writting this poem obviously was a bad idea.
ill try a different subject next time.
still very sorry!

Tweek

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