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Array ( [sid] => 64375 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => -Cry- [time] => 2004-09-19 19:38:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Why do I have to cry?
Why do you make me cry?
It seems you don't care about me,
But you used to.

You told me you loved me,
And I loved you too,
And I still do,
But why do you make me cry?

I'm put through so much pain,
That sometimes I wanna leave,
But i'll never give up on you,
Because I love you too much.

My friends say im crazy,
That I need to move on,
But I can't leave you,
Even though you make me cry.

Why do you make me cry?
That's all I need to know,
Why do you hurt me and hurt me,
Like your doing so. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 32 [informant] => starryskyez09 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

-Cry-

Contributed by starryskyez09 on Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 07:38:49 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Why do I have to cry?
Why do you make me cry?
It seems you don't care about me,
But you used to.

You told me you loved me,
And I loved you too,
And I still do,
But why do you make me cry?

I'm put through so much pain,
That sometimes I wanna leave,
But i'll never give up on you,
Because I love you too much.

My friends say im crazy,
That I need to move on,
But I can't leave you,
Even though you make me cry.

Why do you make me cry?
That's all I need to know,
Why do you hurt me and hurt me,
Like your doing so.

Copyright © starryskyez09 ... [ 2004-09-19 19:38:49]
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Re: -Cry- (User Rating: 1 )
by InnerBeautyQueen on Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 07:41:04 PM AEST
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this hit really hard.
i know what this feels like.
it feels like right now.

good job on your poem.

Re: -Cry- (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 08:07:42 PM AEST
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Hi there,
Psycologically a person that abuses like that do that cause they feel insecure so they make others hurt to hide their insecurity.
My ex and I were together bout six years. Well he never changed he only got worse so I couldn't take anymore so we've been apart all most as long as we were together. I'm alone but very happy with myself.
Luv, huggs,
emy

Re: -Cry- (User Rating: 1 )
by markie on Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 08:26:48 PM AEST
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I'll never give up on you...I wrote that very same line...but he gave up on me...broke my heart and I felt what you feel now. Still do, some. It's gone away, a little...gets better with time and more writing. Keep up the great work...

Re: -Cry- (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 09:47:15 PM AEST
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emotional abuse, i guess that follows the same cycle as violence. which isnt a good thing. i will tell you one thing, dont let passion rule reason. it will only lead you downhill.

Re: -Cry- (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 12:16:56 AM AEST
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I understand how you feel, I've been there before, your a really great writer, Good Work ! and Great Write !!!

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