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[aid] => mick
[title] => Stars shined in JASON’S eyes!
[time] => 2004-09-19 11:50:05
[hometext] => Well after that poem I wrote this morning, I went into town again. You gotta know my past with Jason to under stand the last sentence, but still… PLEASE COMMENT ON HERE! It’s a very emotional piece to me…!
[bodytext] => I went into town today. … Again saw Jason again. All the commotion, Really toyed with my head. But then he said, To leave. That I was banned from there. But then my dad started speaking with him, … So I walked away from there. But it was all, cool. ‘Coz my dad said he’d look after me. Not that he did much, ‘Coz he was dancing in the town center, you see. But it left me. To be me. Go round some shops, Plan my suicidal spree. … But I didn’t have the bottle. And I couldn’t face the fuss. So I stayed round the town center, But for some reason, I DIDN’T rust! … And then I saw Jason again, And he winked at me. That was a strange feeling. I thought he’d just glare at me. And then I saw this other guard. So I said sorry for past times, He looked at me, not looking one bit hard, And said that it was alright. Then him and Jason, walked off out of sight… So I wondered round some more. And bought a book to replace “BLACK SUICIDE”, Because I’m gonna move on now. … And I promised Jason I wouldn’t die… I mucked around with dad a bit. I smiled, and giggled and laughed. I felt so warm inside. … People looked at me like I was daft. Then my dad started embarrassing me, Doing things that fathers just do. I felt good I good to hit him in public, But felt numb to not be on the roof… Then we played fighted some more. The happiness I can’t explain. Today was magically meant to be, But the pain inside still remains… Then I saw Jason, And yet, another guard. I said sorry again. It was really hard. I asked them how long, I’m gonna be banned for, And they said as long as I’m good, The time’ll be no more. Then one explained, They were just doing their jobs. That they just wanted to help me… I wanted to say, That, that last day, I felt so mis-understood. But I left it there, Pushed it into the past. “I won’t go again on the 10th level”, I said at last. Then Jason spoke about Kyle, But I’m not friends with her no more, She got court ‘shop lifting’, In a big Boots store. She used to do it all the time, But then she was court. Don’t think I care. SHE’S A THREAF, NOTHING MORE! Yeah well, Jason dealt with her. Wasn’t he the lucky bloke? To get bad tempered Kyle, The gossiping little toad… He asked me if she’d ever nicked before, And it wasn’t really my place to be. … But told him she had, Because there’s no way she’ll come after me… And I had the urge to say, That so does Zoe, But that would go too far, ‘Coz she’s part of his family… So then he had to go, And told me to look after my-self. But I won’t do more roof tops. So thats no more mental health! He said to be good, And then he’d see me another time. And when he walked away, STARS WERE SHINNING IN HIS EYES!!!!!! [comments] => 5 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 48 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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