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Array ( [sid] => 64280 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => a better place [time] => 2004-09-18 21:25:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => what's the point of this life
i could take it with a knife
no one would even heed
as death carries me as i bleed

clenched fists with slit wrists
from what you can see
no one cares about me

i hate this world, it's ran on obsessions
and unholy confessions
as i take my life today
you'll all carry the burdon of the blame

lying in my bed
i hope to see just what you did to me
blood,dripping obscenely

i got fed up with this ****
you should have seen the hints
now it's too late
i'm in a better place

e-mail me at desertskater16@msn.com and tell me what u think about my "poem" [comments] => 1 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 13 [informant] => steve-o [notes] => Edited for Spelling as Requested and Language by Moderator_15 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

a better place

Contributed by steve-o on Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 09:25:07 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

what's the point of this life
i could take it with a knife
no one would even heed
as death carries me as i bleed

clenched fists with slit wrists
from what you can see
no one cares about me

i hate this world, it's ran on obsessions
and unholy confessions
as i take my life today
you'll all carry the burdon of the blame

lying in my bed
i hope to see just what you did to me
blood,dripping obscenely

i got fed up with this ****
you should have seen the hints
now it's too late
i'm in a better place

e-mail me at desertskater16@msn.com and tell me what u think about my "poem"

Copyright © steve-o ... [ 2004-09-18 21:25:07]
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Re: a better place (User Rating: 1 )
by Lynnie on Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 05:17:21 PM AEST
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I hope you don't mean these words. If so, you need to talk to someone, because you would not be going to a better place. And there is always someone who cares, you just need to look around you.

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