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That can hear my soul screaming
please save me before its too late
Before i take my very last breath

Cause im making plans
And writting letters to those who say they care
Telling them its not their fault
And i will love them forever

Im fighting with all of my strength
And nothing ever seems to get better

You told me you love me
But it doesnt seem enough to stop what im going through
You dont love me, like i do you
That tears me apart even more

I dont know how long i can keep holding on
I will soon be gone
And i cant take anymore
Now i know the only way to make all this pain go away
Theres only one thing left to do
To end this poetic tragedy [comments] => 3 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 13 [informant] => willow_tara72002 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Poetic Tragedy

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 01:29:10 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

If there is anyone out there
That can hear my soul screaming
please save me before its too late
Before i take my very last breath

Cause im making plans
And writting letters to those who say they care
Telling them its not their fault
And i will love them forever

Im fighting with all of my strength
And nothing ever seems to get better

You told me you love me
But it doesnt seem enough to stop what im going through
You dont love me, like i do you
That tears me apart even more

I dont know how long i can keep holding on
I will soon be gone
And i cant take anymore
Now i know the only way to make all this pain go away
Theres only one thing left to do
To end this poetic tragedy

Copyright © willow_tara72002 ... [ 2004-09-18 13:29:10]
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Re: Poetic Tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 02:45:12 PM AEST
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Emotional and discriptive, Yet I cant decide if it is poetry in or life in jepardy :(
But if a life hangs by a thin thread, then at least I can relate well to the pain you feel.....Although sticking at it with living that is a better choice to make in my opinion.
Love is a very fickle companion is it not, we fall for someone as cupids arrow hits home, our world changes around us...then love shows us a sour side and our feelings get so confused......then comes pain...as our lives start to fall apart around our ears...and then it ends in tragidy...when it becomes to much to bare :(
I have let eat away at me for years, but in the end I chose life, You are very talented and it shows with your poetry.....dont chose the other way you would be missed by many if not all.......
But then if I am way off track then just ignore what I have said and know that I apoligise for making assumptions on what I got from the poem.
Take Care Always

Re: Poetic Tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 03:53:56 PM AEST
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Don't you dare even think it!!!
Great poetry..and I hope that's all it is...
Why did you disappear on me??
Hope to talk again soon..ok
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Poetic Tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 09:07:29 AM AEST
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A great poem,
but please, think some more before you do anything.
Please.
You have a great talent.
Amazing write,
Phil xxx

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