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Array ( [sid] => 64208 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => With Time... [time] => 2004-09-18 13:22:59 [hometext] => *One day you will dream of the most peaceful place on Earth. Then, when you wake up, you will see the most beautiful person alive. And finally when tomorrow comes, you will be, peacefully on Earth, living with this beauty, day after day after day...* :) [bodytext] => With Time...

It all started on a beautiful starry night...
Though, how did it happen? Nobody knows.

Yesterday I dreamt of You.
At last a beautiful one!
With all these thoughts rambling inside my head,
At last, I had seen the real You.
You were laying there, on your bed,
Thinking or daydreaming? Hard to tell.
A sudden move, but what was it?
Why would You jump straight to tears?
Nobody knows. Not even..yourself.

Today I can see You.
Here You are, right in front of me.
Finally, I got to see your lovely googly eyes.
With these big chubby cheeks,
A smile popped out of nowhere;
Right onto your face, leaving a trace;
A remarkable one, just so cute and sweet.
What I see are holes; dimples if You wish.
Ones You made yourself,
With such an innocent little smile.

Tomorrow I will be with You.
With these feelings that were put to test,
You and me will finally be capable to rest.
Together we will make one.
Tomorrow, together we will be.
I will sit here now and await for tomorrow,
Since I know this day will show in the end.
I will know when tomorrow comes,
When all of my wishes and prayers have been answered.

Yesterday I dreamt of You.
Today I can finally see You.
Tomorrow I will be with You.

With all this said,
I will, one day be happy.
And You, as much as me.
We will, happily be together.
We will last forever.
Just like the bestest friends;
Just like the greatest lovers.
With time...Together, You and me, we will be.

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With Time...

Contributed by lucyspoetry on Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 01:22:59 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

With Time...

It all started on a beautiful starry night...
Though, how did it happen? Nobody knows.

Yesterday I dreamt of You.
At last a beautiful one!
With all these thoughts rambling inside my head,
At last, I had seen the real You.
You were laying there, on your bed,
Thinking or daydreaming? Hard to tell.
A sudden move, but what was it?
Why would You jump straight to tears?
Nobody knows. Not even..yourself.

Today I can see You.
Here You are, right in front of me.
Finally, I got to see your lovely googly eyes.
With these big chubby cheeks,
A smile popped out of nowhere;
Right onto your face, leaving a trace;
A remarkable one, just so cute and sweet.
What I see are holes; dimples if You wish.
Ones You made yourself,
With such an innocent little smile.

Tomorrow I will be with You.
With these feelings that were put to test,
You and me will finally be capable to rest.
Together we will make one.
Tomorrow, together we will be.
I will sit here now and await for tomorrow,
Since I know this day will show in the end.
I will know when tomorrow comes,
When all of my wishes and prayers have been answered.

Yesterday I dreamt of You.
Today I can finally see You.
Tomorrow I will be with You.

With all this said,
I will, one day be happy.
And You, as much as me.
We will, happily be together.
We will last forever.
Just like the bestest friends;
Just like the greatest lovers.
With time...Together, You and me, we will be.

Written by *~*Lucy*~*

Copyright © lucyspoetry ... [ 2004-09-18 13:22:59]
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Re: With Time... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 01:31:04 PM AEST
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awww sad but written beautifully

pixie xx

Re: With Time... (User Rating: 1 )
by shelliewilliams on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 04:35:53 PM AEST
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very sad, but great to read.

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