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“In circles round the fire we dance
Waltzing—wishing—waiving—‘cant’
Circles circled, a covert glance
Coruscant knights who share a lance”





‘Twas the season sought by all who wore the winter’s wheels
Because the reasons caught the fall before the hinter’s heels
Although the gasping gander’s gall shan’t make the feathers feel
A dove’s beloved larks can call as nightingales can spiel


So rough and tough serrations tore from verdant life to life
Gruff and puffed sensations bore a channel to the rife
And though the trees would bleed away a forest’s aged knife
Rustles in the bustles spell incision-stricken strife


Relieved, deceived, and duly grieved the silence prances past
Bitten, smitten, intermittent cadence can’t come last
Sober, over, three-leaf clovers burn through four-leaf grass
Filed, tiled, reconciled
A (sinking) herald hangs half-mast


So high and low become bestowed in wild, whirling winds
At best, behest the rabid rest to leave the languish limns
Seldom’s sake maroons mistakes when readiness rescinds
And lyres are as liarsleft with helpless, hapless hymns

And through the stains of ribald rains
And weath’ring sands of time
A compass passes passive plains
(Up and down at once the same)




And nothing seems to rhyme.
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Deliciously Delicate

Contributed by EternitysLyre on Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 05:32:26 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems









“In circles round the fire we dance
Waltzing—wishing—waiving—‘cant’
Circles circled, a covert glance
Coruscant knights who share a lance”





‘Twas the season sought by all who wore the winter’s wheels
Because the reasons caught the fall before the hinter’s heels
Although the gasping gander’s gall shan’t make the feathers feel
A dove’s beloved larks can call as nightingales can spiel


So rough and tough serrations tore from verdant life to life
Gruff and puffed sensations bore a channel to the rife
And though the trees would bleed away a forest’s aged knife
Rustles in the bustles spell incision-stricken strife


Relieved, deceived, and duly grieved the silence prances past
Bitten, smitten, intermittent cadence can’t come last
Sober, over, three-leaf clovers burn through four-leaf grass
Filed, tiled, reconciled
A (sinking) herald hangs half-mast


So high and low become bestowed in wild, whirling winds
At best, behest the rabid rest to leave the languish limns
Seldom’s sake maroons mistakes when readiness rescinds
And lyres are as liarsleft with helpless, hapless hymns

And through the stains of ribald rains
And weath’ring sands of time
A compass passes passive plains
(Up and down at once the same)




And nothing seems to rhyme.




Copyright © EternitysLyre ... [ 2004-09-18 05:32:26]
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Re: Deliciously Delicate (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 09:31:36 AM AEST
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O_O I am so surprised that no one has commented.
This is an amazing piece of work.
i love the language you use, and the flow is perfect.
Sorry i could not offer constructive criticism, i cannot find anything wrong with this.
Great write,
Phil xxx


Re: Deliciously Delicate (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 05:05:24 AM AEST
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A good read with strong images.
Greetz,
Hur




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