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down a seemingly bottomless pit

no one to pull the angel from
the desolate hole of her tradgedy
no one to offer words of comfort

millions of hands reach for her
millions of hands try to grab for her
no one can get ahold of this black winged angel

Her halo crooked dented and smugged
by the wolves in the sheeps clothing
blood tears line her face

Fighting within herself
and black rage deeper then the pit
of despair she has come to know as home

Falling Falling, down a bottomless pit,
Never again to see the light of day.

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Crooked Angel

Contributed by poetic_ire on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 10:01:54 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Falling Falling
down a seemingly bottomless pit

no one to pull the angel from
the desolate hole of her tradgedy
no one to offer words of comfort

millions of hands reach for her
millions of hands try to grab for her
no one can get ahold of this black winged angel

Her halo crooked dented and smugged
by the wolves in the sheeps clothing
blood tears line her face

Fighting within herself
and black rage deeper then the pit
of despair she has come to know as home

Falling Falling, down a bottomless pit,
Never again to see the light of day.

Copyright © poetic_ire ... [ 2004-09-17 22:01:54]
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Re: Crooked Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 10:26:11 PM AEST
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beautifully expressed, warm welcome to ypdc too:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Crooked Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 10:44:54 PM AEST
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interesting, seeing yourself as angel, at least it shows you see something beautiful within yourself, no matter what situation

Re: Crooked Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 11:05:47 PM AEST
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Awsome poem, very emotionally written with so vivid , it leaves lasting images.

Re: Crooked Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by brokensoul on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 11:26:38 PM AEST
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Liz that was really good!! i loved it!!

Re: Crooked Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 07:47:39 PM AEST
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huh
sounds like stuff ive been musing about lately
nice!

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