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Array ( [sid] => 64132 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => who am I [time] => 2004-09-17 18:48:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>
WHO AM I


August , 2 2004
11: 36 am

I'm the things that u least want to be, that u stick ur finger down ur throat 6 times or more a day to keep from becoming I'm what guys turn their head away I'm the thing that boys in school made fun of behand ur back and to ur face I'm the thing that guys want hire into their corp because i can't give them a ******** with my nice ***** little body

Who am I I'm the fat girl that who I'm

I'm the thing that be hurt it whole life be push on, pick on made to feel bad made to want cry myself to sleep every nite, sometimes, did walk the halls with tearful eyes with sucide thoughts hangin on my sleeves with my pumin heart in my hand, squeezes it so tight that my blood is running down my arm to keep from feelin as yall threw ur balls of hurt at me

Who am I I'm the angry poet that who I'm

I write my pain any chance that I get I will write on the walls so u have to pass it every dy I will write it on ur doors I will cut u open and force it in ur hearts so u can feel it I will stick it in your brains that it will cause extreme pains make u think in way u never imagine that it will give u a aneurism I will make u sick to ur stomach so u know how u treat me how u hurt me

Who am I I'm a fat girl in pain that who I'm

I'm the girl who fed up with all this *****, of u stuck of peoples with ur shallow hollywood dreams I'm tire and mad I been walking down this ***** up roads for miles u will deal with me or I will deal with u, I won't be denile anymore I'm on a mission to get everybody who ever hurt me I have a list full of victims

Who am I that who I'm

To show u and the world that I will it make it to the top and I will get respect and I will be happy and I will be lust with happiness and sex and love

Who am I that who I'm

I don't care who u are u will feel my presents hear my screams feel my strength if u don't who I'm by now then u better know me by the oral I give know me by fear, know me by pain, know me by anger know me by my crys of river but u better know me

Cause I'm coming and I'm stoping at nothing to suceed and i will open ur eyes and realize that I'm not joking about this pain and hated I have for u all
This is my war and I'm the Genral better yet I'm the president I'm the bombs under ur cars i will unite a fire under u

Who am I I'm a fat girl scrone that who I'm

Hell no fury like a woman scrone espiccally a fat woman
I'm at the end of my rope I'm a time bomb thay went off u just don't know yet I'm a volcano that slowly risely to erutp on this small city of mine the whole entire world

I don't care if u try to rub it in my face that u pretty or skinny then me or that u get all the boys u want every nite as u said that I'm laughin in ur dace quitely cause in my eyes that make u look like a *** and a ****and u braggin about it is my imagtion for my guns to blow off ur heads from ya body with my owrds and slick tongue I will whatever I can My words will be more powerful and painful my tongue more quicker

I don't care who u are if u look like u who are my list if i smell one once of vianty, shallownwess, self-involve, self-centerd on u will be add to the list I don't care who u like if u like a movie stars u look like halle berry look like a hot models u look like brad pitt or vin diesel or if u are even vin diesel if u fit on my list u will be on it I don't care u have money like trump and gates and if u come bangin my door askin how could u said that if not true about u then why are u makin urself look quity by being mad at me cuzz I said if look like the hollywood big shot movie so u make urself look quity if u come running to my battle field, u will pay if u hurt me u just be my casuaty of my war

Who am I that who I'm

Who am I look at the fat girl that u pick on in school look in their eyes u will see me When yall society said u make to the top by looks and nice bodys and who u ***** on the side and u tell the fat girl she not pretty enough to be part og ur society look in her eyes u will see me

The girl u pass up the job or the part to give to the pretter girl with the nice ***** body who u know will give u a nice little ***** and some good doin lunch hour and happy hour cause the girl has no respect for herself and willing to sleep with any one and multple ones a day look in that fat girl eyes cause I'm their

When u are emotinal rapin us everyday give little girl eatin disorders and depression yall have kill the little girl i was i grew up a deadless women with a broken heart that beyond repair my pain is beyond ur comprension it to high for ur IQ this soceity has hurt me for to long u had shed to many of my tears u had shed enough

U mens have u learn nothin from ur mother u don't know u have to respect all women not just the ones that make (Bleep)

I'm a women with a heart i deserve to be love, hold, wanted, needed make love to something worth desireing

Who am I I don't know soceity murder me a long time ago
Who am I I don't remember
Who am I I'm a fat girl lost lookin to be love by someone
Who am I that who I'm one of ur survivein victims tryin to fight back at any means necessary

Revenge is the sweetest sin Next to sex which is another sweetest sin I wonder if I can see myself ever have the joy of experince at this point I don't see enjoying it

Who am I
Who am I

Pandora Maskantinio

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who am I

Contributed by remi on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 06:48:53 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry




WHO AM I


August , 2 2004
11: 36 am

I'm the things that u least want to be, that u stick ur finger down ur throat 6 times or more a day to keep from becoming I'm what guys turn their head away I'm the thing that boys in school made fun of behand ur back and to ur face I'm the thing that guys want hire into their corp because i can't give them a ******** with my nice ***** little body

Who am I I'm the fat girl that who I'm

I'm the thing that be hurt it whole life be push on, pick on made to feel bad made to want cry myself to sleep every nite, sometimes, did walk the halls with tearful eyes with sucide thoughts hangin on my sleeves with my pumin heart in my hand, squeezes it so tight that my blood is running down my arm to keep from feelin as yall threw ur balls of hurt at me

Who am I I'm the angry poet that who I'm

I write my pain any chance that I get I will write on the walls so u have to pass it every dy I will write it on ur doors I will cut u open and force it in ur hearts so u can feel it I will stick it in your brains that it will cause extreme pains make u think in way u never imagine that it will give u a aneurism I will make u sick to ur stomach so u know how u treat me how u hurt me

Who am I I'm a fat girl in pain that who I'm

I'm the girl who fed up with all this *****, of u stuck of peoples with ur shallow hollywood dreams I'm tire and mad I been walking down this ***** up roads for miles u will deal with me or I will deal with u, I won't be denile anymore I'm on a mission to get everybody who ever hurt me I have a list full of victims

Who am I that who I'm

To show u and the world that I will it make it to the top and I will get respect and I will be happy and I will be lust with happiness and sex and love

Who am I that who I'm

I don't care who u are u will feel my presents hear my screams feel my strength if u don't who I'm by now then u better know me by the oral I give know me by fear, know me by pain, know me by anger know me by my crys of river but u better know me

Cause I'm coming and I'm stoping at nothing to suceed and i will open ur eyes and realize that I'm not joking about this pain and hated I have for u all
This is my war and I'm the Genral better yet I'm the president I'm the bombs under ur cars i will unite a fire under u

Who am I I'm a fat girl scrone that who I'm

Hell no fury like a woman scrone espiccally a fat woman
I'm at the end of my rope I'm a time bomb thay went off u just don't know yet I'm a volcano that slowly risely to erutp on this small city of mine the whole entire world

I don't care if u try to rub it in my face that u pretty or skinny then me or that u get all the boys u want every nite as u said that I'm laughin in ur dace quitely cause in my eyes that make u look like a *** and a ****and u braggin about it is my imagtion for my guns to blow off ur heads from ya body with my owrds and slick tongue I will whatever I can My words will be more powerful and painful my tongue more quicker

I don't care who u are if u look like u who are my list if i smell one once of vianty, shallownwess, self-involve, self-centerd on u will be add to the list I don't care who u like if u like a movie stars u look like halle berry look like a hot models u look like brad pitt or vin diesel or if u are even vin diesel if u fit on my list u will be on it I don't care u have money like trump and gates and if u come bangin my door askin how could u said that if not true about u then why are u makin urself look quity by being mad at me cuzz I said if look like the hollywood big shot movie so u make urself look quity if u come running to my battle field, u will pay if u hurt me u just be my casuaty of my war

Who am I that who I'm

Who am I look at the fat girl that u pick on in school look in their eyes u will see me When yall society said u make to the top by looks and nice bodys and who u ***** on the side and u tell the fat girl she not pretty enough to be part og ur society look in her eyes u will see me

The girl u pass up the job or the part to give to the pretter girl with the nice ***** body who u know will give u a nice little ***** and some good doin lunch hour and happy hour cause the girl has no respect for herself and willing to sleep with any one and multple ones a day look in that fat girl eyes cause I'm their

When u are emotinal rapin us everyday give little girl eatin disorders and depression yall have kill the little girl i was i grew up a deadless women with a broken heart that beyond repair my pain is beyond ur comprension it to high for ur IQ this soceity has hurt me for to long u had shed to many of my tears u had shed enough

U mens have u learn nothin from ur mother u don't know u have to respect all women not just the ones that make (Bleep)

I'm a women with a heart i deserve to be love, hold, wanted, needed make love to something worth desireing

Who am I I don't know soceity murder me a long time ago
Who am I I don't remember
Who am I I'm a fat girl lost lookin to be love by someone
Who am I that who I'm one of ur survivein victims tryin to fight back at any means necessary

Revenge is the sweetest sin Next to sex which is another sweetest sin I wonder if I can see myself ever have the joy of experince at this point I don't see enjoying it

Who am I
Who am I

Pandora Maskantinio





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