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Array ( [sid] => 64127 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Yesterday [time] => 2004-09-17 17:29:54 [hometext] => screw ppl who spread rumours and tear ppl down to fill some void in their worthless lives...i hate small towns [bodytext] => I dare you to step into my yesterday
I dare you to cry my tears
I dare you to feel the inside pain
that I've hidden away all these years
If you'd like you can take my tomorrow
and live it how you think I should live
But don't think my tomorrow will be perfect
Because it rarely ever is
Until you've inherited the essence
of my history to now
Until you've cried every single tear
and experienced every fall
Do not draw up loose conclusions
from what is in front of you
What you see and hear is all jaded
How I've lived and felt is real

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My Yesterday

Contributed by AnastasiaN on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 05:29:54 PM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

I dare you to step into my yesterday
I dare you to cry my tears
I dare you to feel the inside pain
that I've hidden away all these years
If you'd like you can take my tomorrow
and live it how you think I should live
But don't think my tomorrow will be perfect
Because it rarely ever is
Until you've inherited the essence
of my history to now
Until you've cried every single tear
and experienced every fall
Do not draw up loose conclusions
from what is in front of you
What you see and hear is all jaded
How I've lived and felt is real

Copyright © AnastasiaN ... [ 2004-09-17 17:29:54]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Yesterday (User Rating: 1 )
by emospaztic on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 05:32:02 PM AEST
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Very bitter. So much raw emotion in this poem. Not bad.

-emo.

Re: My Yesterday (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 06:06:52 PM AEST
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I understand this you put it together well yes small towns dooooooooooo suck tell em up their arrsesssssss
Michelle
live your life and do what you do they have nothing better to do and cant think clearly with their pee brains!!!!!!!!!!!

Re: My Yesterday (User Rating: 1 )
by MomentInTime on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 06:59:54 PM AEST
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This is a good write.... and your sentiments are expressed well.

Jordan oxo

Re: My Yesterday (User Rating: 1 )
by Jolly on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 09:17:37 PM AEST
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basically it says walk a mile in my shoes...right? Big cities have the same bull..I've been in both..part of the problem and part of the solution.. small towns you just get a microscopic view...the rumor in a big city doesn't get back to you as fast lol. or maybe you move before it ever does... best to pay it no mind or you'll be nuts...Great write by the way. as if I'd know...

Re: My Yesterday (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 06:11:11 AM AEST
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a powerful write, good poem

pixie xx

Re: My Yesterday (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 03:22:12 AM AEST
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I too hate living in this small town in Canada....I moved to a big town for a while(calgary) and I loved it.So I know your pain all too well....you definately have a good style in your poetry....keep it up

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