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Array ( [sid] => 64108 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Implicit Pain~ [time] => 2004-09-17 12:27:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => ~Never born from that of grace no tears that so fell without pain and sorrow left in refuge by tha darkest dream you unknowingly did create~
~All hope forgotten yet thought only to be misplaced so yearning for that of a gentle embrace~
~Your heart once filled with tormenting rage forever hidden are tha scares that shall never fade~
~Unforgiving are tha days while your soul senses it has become tamed as this life beheld no plan only to realize you are so damned~
~With no way given to react and by a stilled wind you offer simply a forboding laugh while with clinching hands blood flows through you like that of shattered glass~
~So it has come to be you are now entrapped and holding unto nothing but shame only left alone caught like slaughtered prey as this world sends out its blame~ [comments] => 3 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 13 [informant] => LoelIntrepid [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

~Implicit Pain~

Contributed by LoelIntrepid on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 12:27:23 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

~Never born from that of grace no tears that so fell without pain and sorrow left in refuge by tha darkest dream you unknowingly did create~
~All hope forgotten yet thought only to be misplaced so yearning for that of a gentle embrace~
~Your heart once filled with tormenting rage forever hidden are tha scares that shall never fade~
~Unforgiving are tha days while your soul senses it has become tamed as this life beheld no plan only to realize you are so damned~
~With no way given to react and by a stilled wind you offer simply a forboding laugh while with clinching hands blood flows through you like that of shattered glass~
~So it has come to be you are now entrapped and holding unto nothing but shame only left alone caught like slaughtered prey as this world sends out its blame~

Copyright © LoelIntrepid ... [ 2004-09-17 12:27:23]
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Re: ~Implicit Pain~ (User Rating: 1 )
by emospaztic on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 05:27:25 PM AEST
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This was so whiny, even I couldn't read it all the way through.

-emo.

Re: ~Implicit Pain~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 07:34:20 PM AEST
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dont worry about the other comment, i think this was very heartfelt and shows a lot of talent, keep it up, and keep expressing ur emotions

Re: ~Implicit Pain~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Loellntrepid on Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 01:54:45 AM AEST
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~For I gave all of who I am and yet you desired for me to become less of a man~

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