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Array ( [sid] => 64089 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Trust A Total Stranger Why? [time] => 2004-09-17 08:43:31 [hometext] => Victims of Parental Abduction I have lost a long fought battle to be able to have contact with my daughter I have gave custody to the man that I thought was going to be the one for the rest of our lives instead was 11 yrs or so [bodytext] => Why do I still not trust you?
When I know your words now are torture,
You said that you would never
Take the one thing that makes me smile and the one thing
That makes me awake each day
That is my flesh
You embraced me and always said that
Was one thing you would never do?
But you did and you hurt me
In the worst way that you could, oh why oh why did you not only take my flesh
But played like you cared deeply for 11 yrs or so of our lives
Why did you toy with our child’s?
Affection, feelings, Innocents did you do these things to feel manly
Or did you want me
To feel the pain like I never had before
You embraced me and always said that
Was one thing you would never do?
But you did and you hurt me
In the worst way that you could,
I now sit here each and everyday,
Wondering what it was I did,
That would make you hurt me this way,
You once were my everything,
Until that dreadful day,
The day my heart and sole you
So easily tossed away,
So please be patient with me
When I say things that sound
So mean, but it seems you have made me a angry bitter person inside
Till I awakened one day and said to myself why should I let this stranger turn me this this way
When one day my flesh may come to me and say oh mother dear oh mother I have grown now and realize
How important you are to me and very sorry for the sorrows tis" stranger has caused us is there time to make things right and I said to
My flesh yes my dear as long as I am on this earth and able to walk and talk we will always have this time to make things right
So please my child let me ask tis stranger to answer one thing that has tugged at my heart and soul for so long
If you would answer this,
How can I ever trust you the
Way that I should?

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Trust A Total Stranger Why?

Contributed by clindsey on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 08:43:31 AM in AEST
Topic: ChildrensPoetry



Why do I still not trust you?
When I know your words now are torture,
You said that you would never
Take the one thing that makes me smile and the one thing
That makes me awake each day
That is my flesh
You embraced me and always said that
Was one thing you would never do?
But you did and you hurt me
In the worst way that you could, oh why oh why did you not only take my flesh
But played like you cared deeply for 11 yrs or so of our lives
Why did you toy with our child’s?
Affection, feelings, Innocents did you do these things to feel manly
Or did you want me
To feel the pain like I never had before
You embraced me and always said that
Was one thing you would never do?
But you did and you hurt me
In the worst way that you could,
I now sit here each and everyday,
Wondering what it was I did,
That would make you hurt me this way,
You once were my everything,
Until that dreadful day,
The day my heart and sole you
So easily tossed away,
So please be patient with me
When I say things that sound
So mean, but it seems you have made me a angry bitter person inside
Till I awakened one day and said to myself why should I let this stranger turn me this this way
When one day my flesh may come to me and say oh mother dear oh mother I have grown now and realize
How important you are to me and very sorry for the sorrows tis" stranger has caused us is there time to make things right and I said to
My flesh yes my dear as long as I am on this earth and able to walk and talk we will always have this time to make things right
So please my child let me ask tis stranger to answer one thing that has tugged at my heart and soul for so long
If you would answer this,
How can I ever trust you the
Way that I should?





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Re: Trust A Total Stranger Why? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 04:43:55 PM AEST
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Very sad and touching piece.... I am sorry for your pain....
Welcome to YPDC..the site where one comes to share his/her pain and joys..and know that people care....
Jenni




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