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Array ( [sid] => 64077 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => From the Maze [time] => 2004-09-17 07:20:53 [hometext] => Sixth in the [bodytext] => A path stretches in front of me
As if to point my destiny
But I feel heavy like a stone
Just go away, leave me alone

For ages I'm just laying there
What happens to me, I don't care
Ready now to sleep for good
No more sorrows, all withstood

Suddenly a violent shake
I'm right up and stiff awake
It must have been a heavy quake
I just dozed off, gimme a break!

Suddenly a deep voice says
Don't give up now, no-one has
There's just one thing you should know
The road is long, so off you go!

I'm too tired, leave me be
It's my fate, my misery
Right then I'm put on my feet
Go! your life's yet not complete! [comments] => 5 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Hurretje [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

From the Maze

Contributed by Hurretje on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 07:20:53 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A path stretches in front of me
As if to point my destiny
But I feel heavy like a stone
Just go away, leave me alone

For ages I'm just laying there
What happens to me, I don't care
Ready now to sleep for good
No more sorrows, all withstood

Suddenly a violent shake
I'm right up and stiff awake
It must have been a heavy quake
I just dozed off, gimme a break!

Suddenly a deep voice says
Don't give up now, no-one has
There's just one thing you should know
The road is long, so off you go!

I'm too tired, leave me be
It's my fate, my misery
Right then I'm put on my feet
Go! your life's yet not complete!

Copyright © Hurretje ... [ 2004-09-17 07:20:53]
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Re: From the Maze (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 08:53:29 AM AEST
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a softer dark write, it was very good :) i liked..

pixie xx

Re: From the Maze (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 01:05:28 AM AEST
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"Don't give up now, no-one has
There's just one thing you should know...
..your life is yet not complete."
its true for many poets.. venkat

Re: From the Maze (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 12:39:03 PM AEST
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Don't know how i missed this one. Goos writing.

wildejohnny.

Re: From the Maze (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 01:55:43 AM AEST
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This is a terrific series. It truly is. Very meaningful, personal and uplifting all the way. You've done well.

Andrew

Re: From the Maze (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 12:50:03 AM AEST
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Very good write filled with wisdom.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

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