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Array ( [sid] => 6407 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => good bye [time] => 2002-11-08 20:50:00 [hometext] => its about my best friend, we are not allowed to see each other anymore.... and i wrote this talking about it. [bodytext] => who will i turn to when your not there?
when i need a vaction from life, when i no longer care.
when we're no longer allowed to be friends?
how could they tell me this is the end
were not good together
that your not a true friend
they dont even know,
how can they make our descion to not be friends,
when i am sad you always wiped my tears
and when i pouted you made a smile come near
when you didnt care for the world, i showed you why you should'
and when you said you couldnt and you fell
i picked you up and told you you could
when times were tough we always were there for each other
and when things got rough we cared for each other.
they said i couldnt see you, that us being together would just make
our lives worse
they said our lives we too different, that we could no longer be.... that we were caring on some type of bad curse
thats when it all happen... the begining of a tradgic end
thats when i had to say goodbye to my very best friend [comments] => 5 [counter] => 315 [topic] => 16 [informant] => TiNyOnE [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
good bye

Contributed by TiNyOnE on Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 08:50:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



who will i turn to when your not there?
when i need a vaction from life, when i no longer care.
when we're no longer allowed to be friends?
how could they tell me this is the end
were not good together
that your not a true friend
they dont even know,
how can they make our descion to not be friends,
when i am sad you always wiped my tears
and when i pouted you made a smile come near
when you didnt care for the world, i showed you why you should'
and when you said you couldnt and you fell
i picked you up and told you you could
when times were tough we always were there for each other
and when things got rough we cared for each other.
they said i couldnt see you, that us being together would just make
our lives worse
they said our lives we too different, that we could no longer be.... that we were caring on some type of bad curse
thats when it all happen... the begining of a tradgic end
thats when i had to say goodbye to my very best friend




Copyright © TiNyOnE ... [ 2002-11-08 20:50:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: good bye (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 09:27:29 PM AEST
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This is such a sad write
not really sure what to say
hope all is well with you
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: good bye (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 11:10:40 PM AEST
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very sad not to be able to be friends,Thats real hard! Everyone neds them! Christina


Re: good bye (User Rating: 1 )
by nightrider on Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 08:04:41 AM AEST
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this is really sad. i am so sorry that you cant see your friend anymore! i really wish you well! great write, though!!


Re: good bye (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 06:01:39 AM AEST
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This is really sad...but so well written... hope things work out...
Jenni


Re: good bye (User Rating: 1 )
by KShink on Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 01:43:23 PM AEST
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This is a very sad and heartfelt poem. I am sorry that you had to go through this pain, but keep your chin up!

*Katie




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