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whether to laugh or cry
So, I do a little of both
The one I love, loves another
And, it tears me up inside.
In and out I have scars
Scars that show nothing but
Signs of a broken heart.
My tears fall, fall like the rain
As the blood flows from the vein
The vein in which I've cut for you.
While I hope for the
Denial of the next breath
Thoughts of us are trapped in my mind
Making me push the blade deeper
Deeper into my wrist, that is
Flowing with blood.
You once gave me happiness
Now, just streams of blood
And, scars that I'll try to hide. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Swe3testLittl3S1n [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Broken

Contributed by Swe3testLittl3S1n on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 11:44:08 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

At times, I don't know
whether to laugh or cry
So, I do a little of both
The one I love, loves another
And, it tears me up inside.
In and out I have scars
Scars that show nothing but
Signs of a broken heart.
My tears fall, fall like the rain
As the blood flows from the vein
The vein in which I've cut for you.
While I hope for the
Denial of the next breath
Thoughts of us are trapped in my mind
Making me push the blade deeper
Deeper into my wrist, that is
Flowing with blood.
You once gave me happiness
Now, just streams of blood
And, scars that I'll try to hide.

Copyright © Swe3testLittl3S1n ... [ 2004-09-16 23:44:08]
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Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 12:03:50 AM AEST
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I don't think you need to do that. You need to stop it's not worth the pain hurt or death

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 01:12:42 AM AEST
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This is very sad.
sorry but I don't really think there's a man on this planet I'd self destruct for.
Maybe u were wrong in your thinking cause if he's already got someone else then he's not letting any grass grow under his feet.
My ex didn't waste no time either but he was already seeinf her anyway.
Sure I hurt and had many nites-n-days of agony after I made him leve and when I would beg God to let him come back I knew he wouldn't cause I put my trust in God to do what's best for me.. Now I thank God for those prayers that he looked out for me.
Here I am.
that's been six years ago and I'm happy with me.
Swetty, hapiness comes from with in. Another person can bring a bit of satisfaction but no one but u can make u happy.
Try going to the dr. for help.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, inner peace,
emy

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