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Array ( [sid] => 64048 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Consume I am Immune [time] => 2004-09-16 23:36:56 [hometext] => A million thoughts running thru my head just writing them down as they come out.....comments appreciated....any suggestions welcome [bodytext] => This life I live is so damn tough
I never feel good enough
All this pain all this sin
I cause myself it dwells within
Not sure where it ends
Not sure if it begins
Where to go? What to do?
When you can't trust no one especially you
What to say? How to feel?
When reality always false never real
This pain that I conceal
This disaster around me consumes my soul
I've seem to lost all control

Each day I wake
with good intentions sake
each step I take I slip, I fall, flat on my face
and yet to another day of hell I'll awake
but only for heaven's sake
God all my sins please do take
so again I can wake
with good intentions sake
and live a life with not such a devastating fate

TAJ [comments] => 1 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 13 [informant] => lovesucks [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Consume I am Immune

Contributed by lovesucks on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 11:36:56 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

This life I live is so damn tough
I never feel good enough
All this pain all this sin
I cause myself it dwells within
Not sure where it ends
Not sure if it begins
Where to go? What to do?
When you can't trust no one especially you
What to say? How to feel?
When reality always false never real
This pain that I conceal
This disaster around me consumes my soul
I've seem to lost all control

Each day I wake
with good intentions sake
each step I take I slip, I fall, flat on my face
and yet to another day of hell I'll awake
but only for heaven's sake
God all my sins please do take
so again I can wake
with good intentions sake
and live a life with not such a devastating fate

TAJ

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Re: Consume I am Immune (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 02:04:21 AM AEST
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Dear Teresa,
I think you have much talent, your poetry seems to flow nicely without effort! I really enjoyed reading this particular one because it was so evident you were pouring your heart out! I write with much heart and emotion, but some poets don't and it's just as effective, I want to Welcome you to YPDC.......you are doing the right thing by going out there and commenting.....I would never had the chance to read your lovely poetry unless you contacted me first. I have you in my sites now, and so will be back often.
Keep writing Theresa.........and write and write...the more you write the more you will find your own unique style.
This was lovely indeed!
Lovingcritters
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