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I lay at your feet
Awaiting your taste
Your forbidden fruits of my desire
So precious...
My heart beats to your rhythm
The pulse of our lust
I long for your touch
I worship you in every sense
Flawless in your ways
My immaculate obsession
I lay at your feet
Awaiting your command...
I please you in my mind
My thoughts of desire
This longing to corrupt each other...
Bend me to your liking
Provide my this release
Your bearable pain of pleasure
Break me down
Tell me what to do
Deplete my inner need...
Give freely to me
Your sacred touch
I need this of you my goddess
My worship shall not end
I exist to do your bidding
And I shall lay at your feet
Awaiting your command

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Awaiting your command

Contributed by holderofthestone on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 09:19:45 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

My lovely goddess
I lay at your feet
Awaiting your taste
Your forbidden fruits of my desire
So precious...
My heart beats to your rhythm
The pulse of our lust
I long for your touch
I worship you in every sense
Flawless in your ways
My immaculate obsession
I lay at your feet
Awaiting your command...
I please you in my mind
My thoughts of desire
This longing to corrupt each other...
Bend me to your liking
Provide my this release
Your bearable pain of pleasure
Break me down
Tell me what to do
Deplete my inner need...
Give freely to me
Your sacred touch
I need this of you my goddess
My worship shall not end
I exist to do your bidding
And I shall lay at your feet
Awaiting your command

Copyright © holderofthestone ... [ 2004-09-16 21:19:45]
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Re: Awaiting your command (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 09:31:44 PM AEST
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I liked this, thanks for sharing

Jeni

Re: Awaiting your command (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 09:45:01 PM AEST
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this, is beautiful... hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Awaiting your command (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 09:09:03 AM AEST
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awwww an emotional and beautiful write Holder

pixie xx

Re: Awaiting your command (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 06:58:07 PM AEST
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I really like this it is like in the past the type of speech I dont know I loved it...keep it coming....

much love,
Dani

Re: Awaiting your command (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 10:33:35 AM AEST
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Oooo... What woman *doesn't* want to hear this from someone she loves. Nice! Cheers!

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