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Array ( [sid] => 63999 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Loseing Life [time] => 2004-09-16 16:58:53 [hometext] => My name is Topaz Durham i'm a 15 year old Diabedic this poem is how im felling [bodytext] => The will to fight is fadeing.
My once happy life disapadeing.
Smiles on my face only Masceradeing the pain of being me.

The light with in me dieing, Mother, Father crying oh the pain of being me.
Its been 5 years and i'de be lieing if i said my sole's not dieing the fighter with in me crying
I'm longing to stop trying and slip away to the peacefullness of dieing.

Nice things happen to nice pepole well i proved them wrong
"Nice things happen to nice pepole. Bad things hapen to nice pepole , Sad things happen to nice pepole. But im not a pepole im a person a person lost and fadeing away until her dieing day"

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Loseing Life

Contributed by VampireGirl15 on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 04:58:53 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

The will to fight is fadeing.
My once happy life disapadeing.
Smiles on my face only Masceradeing the pain of being me.

The light with in me dieing, Mother, Father crying oh the pain of being me.
Its been 5 years and i'de be lieing if i said my sole's not dieing the fighter with in me crying
I'm longing to stop trying and slip away to the peacefullness of dieing.

Nice things happen to nice pepole well i proved them wrong
"Nice things happen to nice pepole. Bad things hapen to nice pepole , Sad things happen to nice pepole. But im not a pepole im a person a person lost and fadeing away until her dieing day"

Copyright © VampireGirl15 ... [ 2004-09-16 16:58:53]
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Re: Loseing Life (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 05:07:55 PM AEST
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A very sad write but it's written well.
I'm sorry u r so sad.
Lotsa people live for a log time with diabetus.
That is if they do what the Dr. says and maintain the dieet one needs.
Yes bad things to happen to nice people but that's the hard facts of life.
I do hope-n-pray that u get to feeling beeter realy soon and start enjoying your life.
God bless u.
luv, huggs, prayer, faith, hope, peace, strength,
emy

Re: Loseing Life (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkSoulAngel on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 05:22:45 PM AEST
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hey...yea i know how you feel read my work if u wish *bow*iam always an open ear for anyone plz take me up on that

Re: Loseing Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Freda_Burrel on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 05:54:45 PM AEST
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sad poem , well written .... just keep up the faith

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