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Array ( [sid] => 63991 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The sweetest reverie... [time] => 2004-09-16 15:31:13 [hometext] => I think the title speaks for itself... Enjoy all! Comments very appreciated... [bodytext] => One-winged angel, beautifully dark seraph,
Luminous star that is lost,
Reoccurring dream that haunts my waking hours…
Bittersweet reveries of you…
The trees ebbed giving way to a meadow…
Serene… surreal…
And there you stood….
You wore the night like a cloak of obscurity,
And your hair danced on the wind like a shadow. …
I know not your name, I know not where you came from,
But what I do know, is that I am happy with you…
Let me sleep in your gaze once more,
Float upon your endless sea of splendor…
Emotions run a mock, thoughts are spoken aloud,
All I want is you here with me…
Hushed are the birds in the Winter’s nighttime,
I met you crying underneath the starlight,
Underneath my Muse’s watchful eye,
This Midnight, sorrow speaks a language all its own…
And as I helped you to pick up the pieces,
We stared the enchanting night all without speaking,
Just gazing, yearning for just one kiss,
Until the sun came to claim us for its own…
And as the wind grew thick on the night air,
You embraced me, and we shared a kiss…
Blissful, euphoric, incredibly passionate this exhilarating kiss…
Everything was silenced, time had stopped,
And my heart was rupturing with unbridled love for you, and only you…
You radiate such a warmth,
And I want not but to bask in your brilliant glow,
Forever tipping the scales against Winter,
And melting the ice from my naked breast,
So you could touch my black heart…
In this I adore you…
And as we lie in our patch of Summer,
The jealous stars can only watch our slumber…
They light the heavens, yet offer no warmth of their own…
And while the snow drapes against the sky,
It doesn’t see us as it drifts along by,
Untouched by the Winter in a haven all of our own…
You radiate such a warmth,
You could shroud the Sun in a gaze,
While it reflects like moonlight in your hair…
You melted the snow from into my eyes,
For this I adore you…
With you I will stay,
Here,
Warm,
Forever…
Even after the morning awakens,
After the snow ceases to fall,
After the meadow shines green,
And the birds resume their careless sonnets,
I will see naught but your light,
My only dawn in an endless day…
Je t’ami, mon ange précieux et tombé...
I will always adore you,
Even when I’m blinded by you…



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The sweetest reverie...

Contributed by FleurdeSang on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 03:31:13 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



One-winged angel, beautifully dark seraph,
Luminous star that is lost,
Reoccurring dream that haunts my waking hours…
Bittersweet reveries of you…
The trees ebbed giving way to a meadow…
Serene… surreal…
And there you stood….
You wore the night like a cloak of obscurity,
And your hair danced on the wind like a shadow. …
I know not your name, I know not where you came from,
But what I do know, is that I am happy with you…
Let me sleep in your gaze once more,
Float upon your endless sea of splendor…
Emotions run a mock, thoughts are spoken aloud,
All I want is you here with me…
Hushed are the birds in the Winter’s nighttime,
I met you crying underneath the starlight,
Underneath my Muse’s watchful eye,
This Midnight, sorrow speaks a language all its own…
And as I helped you to pick up the pieces,
We stared the enchanting night all without speaking,
Just gazing, yearning for just one kiss,
Until the sun came to claim us for its own…
And as the wind grew thick on the night air,
You embraced me, and we shared a kiss…
Blissful, euphoric, incredibly passionate this exhilarating kiss…
Everything was silenced, time had stopped,
And my heart was rupturing with unbridled love for you, and only you…
You radiate such a warmth,
And I want not but to bask in your brilliant glow,
Forever tipping the scales against Winter,
And melting the ice from my naked breast,
So you could touch my black heart…
In this I adore you…
And as we lie in our patch of Summer,
The jealous stars can only watch our slumber…
They light the heavens, yet offer no warmth of their own…
And while the snow drapes against the sky,
It doesn’t see us as it drifts along by,
Untouched by the Winter in a haven all of our own…
You radiate such a warmth,
You could shroud the Sun in a gaze,
While it reflects like moonlight in your hair…
You melted the snow from into my eyes,
For this I adore you…
With you I will stay,
Here,
Warm,
Forever…
Even after the morning awakens,
After the snow ceases to fall,
After the meadow shines green,
And the birds resume their careless sonnets,
I will see naught but your light,
My only dawn in an endless day…
Je t’ami, mon ange précieux et tombé...
I will always adore you,
Even when I’m blinded by you…







Copyright © FleurdeSang ... [ 2004-09-16 15:31:13]
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Re: The sweetest reverie... (User Rating: 1 )
by emospaztic on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 03:35:06 PM AEST
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Nice. I love it. You create a feeling of love and warmth.

The trees ebbed giving way to a meadow…
Serene… surreal…
And there you stood….

These are my favorite lines, they just seem to work together.

-emo.


Re: The sweetest reverie... (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 03:38:53 PM AEST
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Brilliant. a connsumate picture of romantic love. also, it has French- always a wonderful touch ;-)
Emily


Re: The sweetest reverie... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 03:42:09 PM AEST
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Ohhhh that was so lovely,

pixie xx


Re: The sweetest reverie... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 03:58:09 PM AEST
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Very beautifull, passonate, creative, deep write.
A masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: The sweetest reverie... (User Rating: 1 )
by wakegurl77 on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 04:41:36 PM AEST
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beautifully written
a romance only dreamed about in the hearts of most
i love it
allways sincere
Leana


Re: The sweetest reverie... (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 05:19:53 PM AEST
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beautifully well woven words, delightful to read, leaves a very peaceful happy feeling in me, un ange tombé peut être sauvé par l'amour..........
hugs n' love nessa

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Re: The sweetest reverie... (User Rating: 1 )
by NikkiiBabii on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 09:11:26 PM AEST
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wow..beautiful=]


Re: The sweetest reverie... (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 02:40:41 AM AEST
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Stephy, I am speechless. That was utterly incredible. I was, and still am, completely spellbound by the words.

Nazmythian ~




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