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Array ( [sid] => 63981 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Waiting a eternity [time] => 2004-09-16 14:00:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I see my hand
Slowly fading away
Drops that are as red as wine
Are falling on my lips
Cold like death
Now I am waiting
To live or to die
To scream for help
Or just wait
For someone to come
And help me
Every second feels like a eternity
When I die
Will I be forgotten
By does who known me
And will my soul go to oblivion
Where it will just wander around
In it’s great white space
I can only see it
When I die
But I cannot say it
To anyone who is still alive
But is it my time
I do not known
I can only wait
Wait a eternity
Or just die
And seek in oblivion my lost family
Who might to
Be wandering in there
Maybe or maybe not
And still I am waiting
For help or for death to come
And while I am thinking
I feel live slipping through my fingers
And my time will come soon
Maybe
And I think why did they do it
Why must my essence of life
Flow out of me
Like a bottle of red wine
Is held upside down
And for what
For some little things
They could have asked for
But should many might say
What done is done
And only father time
Can rewind time
I see from a height
That they have finally come
But to late unfortunately
But now my pain and time
Is over
And I will see where I will come

Waiting a eternity
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Waiting a eternity

Contributed by Naijerana on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 02:00:12 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I see my hand
Slowly fading away
Drops that are as red as wine
Are falling on my lips
Cold like death
Now I am waiting
To live or to die
To scream for help
Or just wait
For someone to come
And help me
Every second feels like a eternity
When I die
Will I be forgotten
By does who known me
And will my soul go to oblivion
Where it will just wander around
In it’s great white space
I can only see it
When I die
But I cannot say it
To anyone who is still alive
But is it my time
I do not known
I can only wait
Wait a eternity
Or just die
And seek in oblivion my lost family
Who might to
Be wandering in there
Maybe or maybe not
And still I am waiting
For help or for death to come
And while I am thinking
I feel live slipping through my fingers
And my time will come soon
Maybe
And I think why did they do it
Why must my essence of life
Flow out of me
Like a bottle of red wine
Is held upside down
And for what
For some little things
They could have asked for
But should many might say
What done is done
And only father time
Can rewind time
I see from a height
That they have finally come
But to late unfortunately
But now my pain and time
Is over
And I will see where I will come

Waiting a eternity

Copyright Â© Naijerana ... [ 2004-09-16 14:00:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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