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if you knew the nights i pondered, wandered in my mind,
wondered where you resided, what you were doing,
how you felt, your heart would melt,

if ever you were aware, as by candlelight you wrote,
penning from heart to paper your songs,
i was right beside you all along,

when i sit and write, still i use that candlelight,
long creative hours into dark life nights,
same flame as always, a cozmic light,

heart looking over shoulder as you sat in your chair
typing into the universe, flicking your hair,
if ever you felt me, its true, i was there,

as i sat and wondered if you knew,
in a crystal mellow flare,
far away over there.

§* *§
*|*

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if you knew

Contributed by ladyfawn on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 12:29:53 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

if you knew the nights i pondered, wandered in my mind,
wondered where you resided, what you were doing,
how you felt, your heart would melt,

if ever you were aware, as by candlelight you wrote,
penning from heart to paper your songs,
i was right beside you all along,

when i sit and write, still i use that candlelight,
long creative hours into dark life nights,
same flame as always, a cozmic light,

heart looking over shoulder as you sat in your chair
typing into the universe, flicking your hair,
if ever you felt me, its true, i was there,

as i sat and wondered if you knew,
in a crystal mellow flare,
far away over there.

§* *§
*|*

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Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 12:37:13 PM AEST
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Aww hun this is beautiful, written perfectly and I love the picture. Maybe there are soul mates, who knows? Would the two in question even know when they met? *shrugs* I havent a clue lol

Love 'n Hugs
- Becca

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 12:46:34 PM AEST
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Exquisite picture, music, words. I question if there is more than one true mate a lifetime? I certainly do hope so. Beautifully penned, Nessa.

Hugs,
Rita

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Alovinmann on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 12:47:06 PM AEST
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I always felt your presence you never left me for a moment. When someone fills your heart the way you filled mine the term soul mate seems trite
P

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 12:47:51 PM AEST
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warm thoughts and rushes of excitement.....the recognition that you know everything important about them.....instantly......kindred or not....soulmate or not.....it needn't matter......it's all good.....you write so eloquently girl.......i love the perspective in this one....:)

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 01:35:51 PM AEST
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Perfect as a snowflake...and as beautiful.

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 01:53:54 PM AEST
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wow nessa this is so beautiful, and very moving,

takecare

pixie xx

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 03:11:49 PM AEST
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Nessa
your heartsongs create the most beautiful music
Michelle

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 04:44:59 PM AEST
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candle light such a great setting for beautiful poetry. well done.

wildejohnny.

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 05:10:03 PM AEST
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Ladyfawn, this is very precious and enchanting.. The music that goes along with it, meshes with the words, and masterfully creates a piece of true perfection... Undying love, reminsce, an unbearable yearning to be in the arms with the one you love... Ay me! My heart strings have been softly plucked, creating a sweet song... Incredibly beautiful, writ large across the Heavens, and shall be cherished by lovers all over the world... Mote it be. This will forever be etched in my fevered mind, teasing me, enchanting me, longing for my lover's blissful kiss... I thank you, for sharing this masterpiece once more, dearest ladyfawn... You are truly talented... Pen on, fellow poet. All my love! Your newest fan,

FleurdeSang

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 07:48:52 PM AEST
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Wonderful as always.
--Mothy

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 08:53:58 PM AEST
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aww ladyfawn this was so beautifully written very enjoyable read great job

Brandy

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 10:36:41 PM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this. I have often wondered if soul mates really do exist. Thanks for the enlightenment.

Jeni

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 11:31:33 PM AEST
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I'm sure he knows....*wink*
Beautiful write...
Jenni

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 02:52:57 AM AEST
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Sat in a crystal mellow flare!!!..
awww.. this is very beautiful;..
best of luck. venkat

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 07:10:13 AM AEST
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Wonderful and o so romantic... It sets my mind in candlelight!
Hugs,
Hur

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by critterhideaway on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 07:14:07 AM AEST
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Beautiful thoughts. I know thesr feelings very well. Thank you for this!!

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 07:16:48 AM AEST
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I would kill, well not really but you know what I mean, for one tenth of your poetic thoughts. How you consistantly come up with such ideas and ways of expression......leaves me breathless and a bit jealous :oP. beautiful ness

Roses
Larry

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by WinterFawn on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 07:24:46 AM AEST
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How beautiful this is ladyfawn. I for one do believe in soul mates. :o)

WinterFawn

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 12:31:05 PM AEST
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more perfect it could not be

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 01:09:33 PM AEST
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Wonderful write~
really enjoyed it.
Jeff

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 02:49:29 PM AEST
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The essence of that connection that makes you one another's muses. Beautiful.
Stitch

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Aquaelius on Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 09:49:28 PM AEST
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I think I started crying before the picture and words came up... I was soooo wrapped up in the music. Then *blam* the picture showed up and all the beautiful words that followed. I am humbled.

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 11:24:07 AM AEST
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Ladyfawn we all have a soulmate somewhere on this earth of ours. Some find their soulmate others are sadly just left to dream about each other. Hugs from Bernard.

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 01:32:03 PM AEST
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Nessa this is so enlightening for me. I've not given much thought to soulmates? Do we really have soulmates, or can we make......a soulmate? If you love someone enough, could they too feel like a soulmate. Such interesting questions you raise here.
This was a delight to read, question, and to see!
Your image reminded me of Romeo and Juliet.......young, romantic, and they felt very much in love!
So nice to spend the time reading your lovely poetry
hugs
consue

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:48:47 AM AEST
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Woah Lady you have written such a touching poem, of love and music within the heart, a ryme that has left me awestruck..as you always do.
Beautifully written with such intense passion imbeded within each word.
Take care aways Ladyfawn

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Flipped_out on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 02:50:19 AM AEST
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Truly a from the soul beautiful romantic write, quite an inspiration...I wish I could write like this

TY

Kell x

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 11:12:36 AM AEST
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What a beautiful write & how you portray the picture in a most delighful way. Makes for great reading. Very lovely indeed.

Corinna

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 04:58:55 PM AEST
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can't fault this ladyfawn - can't believe how powerful and strong this piece is!! so so good

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 03:18:54 AM AEST
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Awesome writing ,my friend.
Great graphics and music.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 03:19:12 AM AEST
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Awesome writing ,my friend.
Great graphics and music.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 09:27:18 AM AEST
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....gentle and delicate
your words are beautiful
cheers!

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 12:28:01 PM AEST
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Nothing but excellence and beauty.. from (if i may say so) one of the most talented poets here.
This is wonderful Nessa.
charlotte x_x_x

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 05:34:34 PM AEST
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This is an awesome poem augmented by a very bueatiful song

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 08:06:32 PM AEST
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Nessa, what a beautifully written piece. My heart goes out to you my dear friend. *hugs* *S* Cynthia

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Lee on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 09:37:22 PM AEST
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Poet at Industrial Colosseums Unbound
Says:

With God's love and faith in Christ, one need
not be concerned with the concept of "soulmate", in my opinion.

Well-written rhymed verse, good imagery, and good , albiet a type-o, word imagery "cozmic".

Jolly Good Show!

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 09:52:55 PM AEST
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wow nessa....
this was so pretty, amazing, beautiful. and the list goes on and on.
i loved this write, it flowed so effortlessly. and the music and picture were a great addition.
loved this nes.
great work. 5 stars
Becky

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Adonia_Donata on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 01:46:17 PM AEST
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Beautiful, my love, as truely wonderous as you heart. A wonderful write.

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Fwog on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 03:07:57 PM AEST
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How hauntingly beautiful, took my breath away.
You dear ladyfawn are a true wordsmith but even more than that you are so real.
Thank you for sharing this poignant write.
Hug and xoxoxo
Fwog

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Twisterchaser on Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 02:49:51 PM AEST
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How true if we only knew...beautiful words by a beautiful lady...the music to it is awesome....

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 12:32:23 AM AEST
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You are a wonderful poet!! Thanks for shring this work of poetry.

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 11:08:44 AM AEST
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A lovely gust of romantic affection.

You have conveyed a lovely warming picture. This is truly sentatioanl, what a remarkable piece of work.

Very much enjoyed by myself.

What else can I say, keep them coming.

Corinna

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:08:20 AM AEST
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Wow, so touching and beautiful.

Spazzo

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Twisterchaser on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:23:58 AM AEST
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As always a beautiful touching write. The power of the pen desplaid in your hands.
Regards

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 11:02:18 PM AEST
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oh if only....fantastic poem. your first stanza was amazing and your last was brilliant. nice.

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 06:17:54 PM AEST
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Amazingly sweet and penetrating... Engulfs the reader with romantic, slightly sad mist...

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 5th December 2008 @ 04:23:50 PM AEST
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this is very beautiful, top job!

-phil

Re: if you knew (User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on Monday, 21st July 2014 @ 02:21:07 AM AEST
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left a nice warmth in my heart

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