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Array ( [sid] => 6391 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Night Enchantress [time] => 2002-11-08 13:30:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The black river of night
washes over my bare body
and I'm swept up in its currents.
And it takes me beyond all the shadows,
And out into the space between the stars.
A cascade of moonlight
shines through the ink
onto my swirling hair,
creating a widespread golden halo.
A smile tickles my lips
As I twirl in delight.
Then a teratoid black cloud
extinguishes the moonlight .
And it makes its move,
And the darkness consumes me. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 13 [informant] => alternachik29 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Night Enchantress

Contributed by alternachik29 on Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 01:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The black river of night
washes over my bare body
and I'm swept up in its currents.
And it takes me beyond all the shadows,
And out into the space between the stars.
A cascade of moonlight
shines through the ink
onto my swirling hair,
creating a widespread golden halo.
A smile tickles my lips
As I twirl in delight.
Then a teratoid black cloud
extinguishes the moonlight .
And it makes its move,
And the darkness consumes me.

Copyright Â© alternachik29 ... [ 2002-11-08 13:30:00]
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Re: Night Enchantress (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 01:33:22 PM AEST
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What a very discriptive write! I liked this Christina

Re: Night Enchantress (User Rating: 1 )
by Elisabeth on Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 02:11:15 PM AEST
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Cool poem, I really like it.

Re: Night Enchantress (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 03:13:48 PM AEST
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Wow from one vision
to another in so few words
I enjoyed reading this
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Night Enchantress (User Rating: 1 )
by alternachik29 on Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 06:43:40 AM AEST
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Thanks to all! I'm glad you liked it! Keep reading my other posts. I'd love to hear what you all think!

Re: Night Enchantress (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 04:13:20 PM AEST
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hey chica! We'll see if you figure out this is me... I haven't gotten around to making my own account yet... I think I've read this one before, but in case I didn't tell you then, this is an awesome poem... lyl, K

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