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chapped lipped scream silent goodbye for love we lost has faded away
Contributed by
innerbeautyqueen
on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 08:42:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i just want to let you know
you were the only secret i've ever kept
and i've loved you forever
but now i have to let go
and my fingers are bleeding
as they're ripped from the clasp they've held so long
frozen in position
cracking with movement
my lips chapped as they cry
because the feelings we held ran dry
nothing's left for you my love
but the friendship that we now sustain
and i hope it's there forever
because i don't think i could bare losing you again
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innerbeautyqueen
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2004-09-15 20:42:14] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: chapped lipped scream silent goodbye for love we lost has faded away
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 09:15:47 PM AEST (User
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wow, what a title, i just had to read this, and its great!! wishing you the best, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: chapped lipped scream silent goodbye for love we lost has faded away
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 07:18:07 PM AEST (User
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Great work. I really liked this. |
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Re: chapped lipped scream silent goodbye for love we lost has faded away
(User Rating: 1 ) by evilfairy on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 09:29:46 PM AEST (User
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this is raw. i love it.... you're one of my fave poets on here. i always come back to read ur work. |
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