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I can't make you see
How special you are
casue your everything to me
I can't make you want me
I can't make you mine
but I can show you light
at your darkest times
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i can't make you love me

Contributed by alyssakoren_03 on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 06:01:30 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I can't make you love me
I can't make you see
How special you are
casue your everything to me
I can't make you want me
I can't make you mine
but I can show you light
at your darkest times

Copyright © alyssakoren_03 ... [ 2004-09-15 18:01:30]
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Re: i can't make you love me (User Rating: 1 )
by silent_tears on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 06:11:29 PM AEST
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sounds good for a start. maybe you could just continue with the things you can do for him/her. Just pull it from real liefe, t hat makes the best poetry- something youve been through

Re: i can't make you love me (User Rating: 1 )
by tears_of_blood on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 07:41:32 PM AEST
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ya i have to say the same thing just go with what you love so much about him/her and it well come good start

Re: i can't make you love me (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 10:36:02 PM AEST
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great words so far, just continue down the same avenue, he WILL get the message

Re: i can't make you love me (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 05:50:40 PM AEST
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very sweet, ...good advive youve gotten, let your heart speak and youll know:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: i can't make you love me (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:34:17 AM AEST
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I liked this the way it is. I can say you could at more to this poem. Just think about what you guys do or what you feel about him or what you do with him or her

Re: i can't make you love me (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 01:15:18 AM AEST
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This paints a simple picture, but a good one. I'm not sure you need to add anything. Perhaps just fill what you have out a bit more.

Keep writing! You have a beautiful touch.

Andrew

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