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Array ( [sid] => 63870 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => November [time] => 2004-09-15 17:55:11 [hometext] => This poem is about a friend of mine who commited suicide, and then after that a friend of mine died in a car accident. So it's verry emotional for me, but please, I would love comments. [bodytext] => NOVEMBER

I'll walk slowly into November
Until I can't remember
All the sorrow
That happened the day before tomorrow.
September has been
A month of pain, depression and sin
He left all of us alone,
And When I think of it I shiver down to my bone.
He's gone forever
But maybe by November
We'll all have done our grieving
And then he will be recieving
All our prayers that he is in
A better place, free of pain, depression and sin.


However, I can't help but wonder, if it's all the same,
Are our prayers are all in vain?
Could he be some place
Worse than this world without his face?
Some place worse than the aching,
Some place with nothing?
But my prayers are answered by
Relief of his ghost, haunting my mind with lies
And some how this answers my prayers.
Somehow I know
That we'll make it through.
Somehow I know by November
But I still remember. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 36 [informant] => silent_tears [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
November

Contributed by silent_tears on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 05:55:11 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



NOVEMBER

I'll walk slowly into November
Until I can't remember
All the sorrow
That happened the day before tomorrow.
September has been
A month of pain, depression and sin
He left all of us alone,
And When I think of it I shiver down to my bone.
He's gone forever
But maybe by November
We'll all have done our grieving
And then he will be recieving
All our prayers that he is in
A better place, free of pain, depression and sin.


However, I can't help but wonder, if it's all the same,
Are our prayers are all in vain?
Could he be some place
Worse than this world without his face?
Some place worse than the aching,
Some place with nothing?
But my prayers are answered by
Relief of his ghost, haunting my mind with lies
And some how this answers my prayers.
Somehow I know
That we'll make it through.
Somehow I know by November
But I still remember.




Copyright © silent_tears ... [ 2004-09-15 17:55:11]
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Re: November (User Rating: 1 )
by alyssakoren_03 on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 06:04:50 PM AEST
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o wonderful wonderful so much emtion it's always hard when you lose a friend hang in there littel buddy hugs and kisses


Re: November (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 06:33:12 PM AEST
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Very beautiful poem.

They hear us, and they always will.

Thanks for sharing.


Re: November (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 10:51:04 PM AEST
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powerful and emotional. you seem to be taking it well as you are. time erases what isnt held on to...




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