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Of your dizzy lies
They fly through the hallways
With unchaperoned eyes

They burn and scorch
an un-tamable fire
They know the secrets
of your hearts true desire

They watch and listen
waiting to kill
To suffocate blindly
You sit un-knowing and still

They pierce and they cut
A cynic's delight
They scream with laughter
As you cry in fright

They sever and spear
Any purity that may remain
They tarnish sweetly
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The Silent Killer

Contributed by bonita2689 on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 09:20:01 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Make me a victim
Of your dizzy lies
They fly through the hallways
With unchaperoned eyes

They burn and scorch
an un-tamable fire
They know the secrets
of your hearts true desire

They watch and listen
waiting to kill
To suffocate blindly
You sit un-knowing and still

They pierce and they cut
A cynic's delight
They scream with laughter
As you cry in fright

They sever and spear
Any purity that may remain
They tarnish sweetly
While singing softly of the stains

Copyright © bonita2689 ... [ 2004-09-15 09:20:01]
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Re: The Silent Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 09:49:34 AM AEST
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I give... LOL... I can think of a dozen and one things it could be... and probably isn't any of them...
It's a great write though... love the rhythm and flow...
~Donna~

Re: The Silent Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 11:31:57 AM AEST
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is this like... they enter tis place and kill some of their victims really quickly, while others suffer a slow... and painful death, and all the while the killer are laughing and sining in sweet song toneal voices, but the words are actually quite the oppsite to pleasant... i might be wrong... it's just a guess...
this is an excellent piece of work al the same though..!

Re: The Silent Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 01:47:13 PM AEST
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A silent killer..that flies down the hallway and tarnishes... hmmmm interesting... something that ruins my good copper? LOL. this is driving me nuts..great write

Re: The Silent Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by Evanescencefreak on Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 03:06:49 AM AEST
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Gossip, lies, rumers that's what I think. Really great. I love it and it's really true as well.

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