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Array ( [sid] => 63801 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Slashdrive Daybreak 15.09.04 [time] => 2004-09-15 05:30:37 [hometext] => First poem in a few months. Please tell me what you think it is trying to say. I would love to know how different people interpret it. [bodytext] => steal a gasp of their feelings
a pinch of the universe in i love you
to hoard it and defend it
and hope to gather enough that one day
i may say it once
and wish my heart to explode

but they sense of my presence
and try to hide their love as if shameful
of the earths knowledge
that the leaves would gossip ecstatically
and the next morning from their bed know
that mother nature has been told
in the gentle cold glow glistening
on the white dustcover of the earth
hours of purity
in her respect just for them

knowing my thievery
drawn selfishly as a vampire
forever drinking the grail
that is never complete
to replace that which i've burnt
in hell [comments] => 1 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 14 [informant] => lapse [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Slashdrive Daybreak 15.09.04

Contributed by lapse on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 05:30:37 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

steal a gasp of their feelings
a pinch of the universe in i love you
to hoard it and defend it
and hope to gather enough that one day
i may say it once
and wish my heart to explode

but they sense of my presence
and try to hide their love as if shameful
of the earths knowledge
that the leaves would gossip ecstatically
and the next morning from their bed know
that mother nature has been told
in the gentle cold glow glistening
on the white dustcover of the earth
hours of purity
in her respect just for them

knowing my thievery
drawn selfishly as a vampire
forever drinking the grail
that is never complete
to replace that which i've burnt
in hell

Copyright © lapse ... [ 2004-09-15 05:30:37]
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Re: Slashdrive Daybreak 15.09.04 (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 05:31:57 AM AEST
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Haunting words, strong imagery. This poem is very well written and I enjoyed reading it.
Greetz,
Hur

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