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Loveable Lucy is her name
Soon to be known all over
achieving world wide fame
She is lovlier than barbie
in every possible way
More elegant than all the others
getting prettier everyday
The magic built inside her
gives you what you ask
Letting Lovable Lucy
perform your every task
All you need to do
is give the proper command
Then Lucy smiles right at you
as if you took her by her hand
Doing exactly what you want
with a special kind of pride
Like it was really you
that was living right inside

Bruce Nurock

Copyright ©2004 Bruce Nurock
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Loveable Lucy

Contributed by Bruce on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 02:39:34 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

This very beautiful life size doll
Loveable Lucy is her name
Soon to be known all over
achieving world wide fame
She is lovlier than barbie
in every possible way
More elegant than all the others
getting prettier everyday
The magic built inside her
gives you what you ask
Letting Lovable Lucy
perform your every task
All you need to do
is give the proper command
Then Lucy smiles right at you
as if you took her by her hand
Doing exactly what you want
with a special kind of pride
Like it was really you
that was living right inside

Bruce Nurock

Copyright ©2004 Bruce Nurock

Copyright Â© Bruce ... [ 2004-09-15 02:39:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Loveable Lucy (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:24:57 AM AEST
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awwww such a lovely and sweet write Bruce,

pixie xx

Re: Loveable Lucy (User Rating: 1 )
by veramouse on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 05:33:36 AM AEST
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lovely and sweet write?????

you gotta be kidding

ask bruce who she is......LOL

Re: Loveable Lucy (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 05:44:35 AM AEST
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ummmm...........hmmmmm.............Liked the poem. ummmmm.........can't you order those from books? LOL Don't know what else to say, so tata for now.
Thumps ; 0)

Re: Loveable Lucy (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 12:46:17 PM AEST
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Bruce i am surprised at you you are very naughty. I take it lucy is in to lots of fresh air lol

A very funny poem

Love Sweetangelukxxx

Re: Loveable Lucy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 09:29:52 PM AEST
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LOL......oh man! This poem should have
come wrapped in a brown paper bag!
Cute, Bruce. Very cute!

~Breezy

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