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Array ( [sid] => 63759 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My First [time] => 2004-09-14 20:07:46 [hometext] => please send comments on this one because i was kind of embarrassed to put this one on the internet... [bodytext] => I take him to my secret place
Far up in the trees,
Where we can be in private
And talk about what we want to be.
We lay on a blanket
And hold each other close.
We start to kiss
And in my stomach butterflies arose.
He felt me go tense
Then slowed down a little.
he slowly rubbed his fingertips
Over my body, like I was brittle.
As I became more friendly,
He began to unzip my skirt
And slowly slid it down my legs,
While I unbuttoned my shirt.
We kissed a while longer
Then I got up the courage
To slide off his jeans,
And to me he seemed to encourage.
I slide off his briefs,
While he slides my panties off slowly,
And unhooks my bra in ecstasy,
Which my mother would think is unholy.
He slips it in unnoticed
And all I feel is pleasure,
As he goes in and out,
This love I can truely treasure.
I love his muscular body,
I love the way it moves,
It just glides across mine
So silky and smooth.
As we reach the climax,
It seems as if we're through,
But instead I get all tingly,
And he kisses lovingly and true.
As we get dressed
To get back before dark,
He tells me he loves me
And between us, I feel a lovely spark.
Although it was my first,
I am very glad I did it,
Especially with him,
I don't regret it, not one bit!!! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 2 [informant] => stew [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
My First

Contributed by stew on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:07:46 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I take him to my secret place
Far up in the trees,
Where we can be in private
And talk about what we want to be.
We lay on a blanket
And hold each other close.
We start to kiss
And in my stomach butterflies arose.
He felt me go tense
Then slowed down a little.
he slowly rubbed his fingertips
Over my body, like I was brittle.
As I became more friendly,
He began to unzip my skirt
And slowly slid it down my legs,
While I unbuttoned my shirt.
We kissed a while longer
Then I got up the courage
To slide off his jeans,
And to me he seemed to encourage.
I slide off his briefs,
While he slides my panties off slowly,
And unhooks my bra in ecstasy,
Which my mother would think is unholy.
He slips it in unnoticed
And all I feel is pleasure,
As he goes in and out,
This love I can truely treasure.
I love his muscular body,
I love the way it moves,
It just glides across mine
So silky and smooth.
As we reach the climax,
It seems as if we're through,
But instead I get all tingly,
And he kisses lovingly and true.
As we get dressed
To get back before dark,
He tells me he loves me
And between us, I feel a lovely spark.
Although it was my first,
I am very glad I did it,
Especially with him,
I don't regret it, not one bit!!!




Copyright © stew ... [ 2004-09-14 20:07:46]
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Re: My First (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:16:46 PM AEST
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Finally someone who doesn't regret it...
THANK god!!!!!!!!!!!
i sure as hell didn't thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!

blessed be
sirena


Re: My First (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:23:13 PM AEST
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A little personal but I give you props for having the "balls" to post this. I'm glad it was truelly something special for you.
ALINA


Re: My First (User Rating: 1 )
by anonymussme on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 09:41:25 PM AEST
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lol, i just tried it last night with my bf for the first time. not quite so romantic. it hurt so bad we had to stop. i like the poem though


Re: My First (User Rating: 1 )
by Deathly_Rose on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 03:15:21 PM AEST
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very well written... if only everybody's first was this passionate... I will agree that it does feel great when you're sharing it with somebody that you truely care about... My first was good when it happened, but when I found out that he was cheating on me and using me the feeling went away... I now regret giving it away because he took me for granted... Anyways it was an awesome write keep up the good work hun




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