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Array ( [sid] => 63724 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => REALITY [time] => 2004-09-14 15:52:19 [hometext] => written in '02 when I was going through suicide attempts and drug abuse [bodytext] => Sometimes your screams
Make me cry
So I go find a place to hide
I hide in that place
Until you pull me out
I wait for your abuse
Then I scream and shout !!

I hate my life
So I go and get high
I come back "home" to screaming parents
I wish I could die!

I go to the bathroom
I lock the door
I find a razor
The feeling to cut
Becomes more and more.

So I take the razor
I cut my wrists
I cut away my pain
I have raging fists.

I pass out for a while
Until I hear you banging on the door
My pain comes back to my heart
I'm in REALITY once more.

( Thank god I don't do this anymore.) [comments] => 5 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Alina [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

REALITY

Contributed by Alina on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 03:52:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Sometimes your screams
Make me cry
So I go find a place to hide
I hide in that place
Until you pull me out
I wait for your abuse
Then I scream and shout !!

I hate my life
So I go and get high
I come back "home" to screaming parents
I wish I could die!

I go to the bathroom
I lock the door
I find a razor
The feeling to cut
Becomes more and more.

So I take the razor
I cut my wrists
I cut away my pain
I have raging fists.

I pass out for a while
Until I hear you banging on the door
My pain comes back to my heart
I'm in REALITY once more.

( Thank god I don't do this anymore.)

Copyright © Alina ... [ 2004-09-14 15:52:19]
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Re: REALITY (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 03:58:27 PM AEST
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very powerful, especially the last stanza... good write*

Re: REALITY (User Rating: 1 )
by parkman on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 05:22:35 PM AEST
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powerful and emotional write ty for sharing

Re: REALITY (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:02:35 PM AEST
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I've gone through stuff similar...so sad...great poem though...

please comment on my work too
summer

Re: REALITY (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:43:19 PM AEST
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And Thank God you are still with us !!
Thanks for sharing what must have been a difficult time in your life

Steve

Re: REALITY (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 11:30:24 PM AEST
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I really like this. I could say this is sad and I hate people that would put their lifes in hell just because they can't faces their fear.

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