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Array ( [sid] => 6370 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Lost At Sea [time] => 2002-11-08 04:00:00 [hometext] => Thank you everyone for your comments on my last poem "Make This Poem Cry." Well here I go again. I hope you enjoy it. [bodytext] => I am a ship lost at sea,
Land is no where to be seen,
As the waves toss me around,
I long to hear one sound,

A loving voice, a cheerful cry,
A passionate look, those big brown eyes,
Another's heart beat in sink with mine,
A love that will stand the test of time,

The clouds grow dark, the wind begains to howl,
The waves grow taller ,will a love be found,
The rain starts to fall,
A lonely heart releases it's call,

A laugh, a smile,
Even if only a little while,
A hug, a kiss,
Yes you are truely missed,

Give me a sign,
Allow me to see, I don't want to be blind,
I'm just a ship lost at sea,
Is there any one out there for me?

Forever Faithful,
The Phantom [comments] => 8 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 22 [informant] => The_Phantom [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 29 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Lost At Sea

Contributed by The_Phantom on Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 04:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I am a ship lost at sea,
Land is no where to be seen,
As the waves toss me around,
I long to hear one sound,

A loving voice, a cheerful cry,
A passionate look, those big brown eyes,
Another's heart beat in sink with mine,
A love that will stand the test of time,

The clouds grow dark, the wind begains to howl,
The waves grow taller ,will a love be found,
The rain starts to fall,
A lonely heart releases it's call,

A laugh, a smile,
Even if only a little while,
A hug, a kiss,
Yes you are truely missed,

Give me a sign,
Allow me to see, I don't want to be blind,
I'm just a ship lost at sea,
Is there any one out there for me?

Forever Faithful,
The Phantom



Copyright © The_Phantom ... [ 2002-11-08 04:00:00]
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Re: Lost At Sea (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 05:51:55 AM AEST
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Very lovely write! i enjoyed this a lot! Christina


Re: Lost At Sea (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 06:38:42 AM AEST
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WoW!!! This is terrific, Phantom... Great imagery.... (needs a bit of spell check tho..)
I enjoyed this immensely...
Jenni


Re: Lost At Sea (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 08:17:06 AM AEST
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This brought tears to
my eyes, it's a very pretty
poem, and very inspiring
and heartfelt, Thank you
for sharing it. I want to
read more of your writings
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: Lost At Sea (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 05:24:36 PM AEST
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Thank you for all of your comments they keep me wanting to write more, thank you again.

The Phantom


Re: Lost At Sea (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomsLDY on Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 01:01:01 PM AEST
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It isn't the spelling that makes this a great poem it is the heart felt emotions that are behind it. It also isn't very nice to correct someone in your comments send them a private message instead.


Re: Lost At Sea (User Rating: 1 )
by LostDream on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 04:01:31 AM AEST
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Simply wonderful...
My compliments,you're a great writer,
this poem sounds "alive",you know...
I really liked it!
Sara


Re: Lost At Sea (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 11:43:40 PM AEST
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Dear Phantom @-<-<<-
Another wonderful write from you.. so enchanting and beautiful..
Your writing friend,
always Nessa


Re: Lost At Sea (User Rating: 1 )
by car21221 on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 10:17:30 PM AEST
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wriiten very good and i like the poem nice job




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