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my eyes naked
revealing all.
Hand trembling
you taste my insecurity
like virgin fruit in your mouth.
I smell your confidence.
It's an aura so bold,
you glow with it.
As I warm
your aura softens, fades,
and mine grows.
'Til entwined like serpents
you raise naked eyes to me...
And I smile, confidently. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 266 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ShadowsCloud [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Naked Eyes

Contributed by ShadowsCloud on Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 03:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I come to you
my eyes naked
revealing all.
Hand trembling
you taste my insecurity
like virgin fruit in your mouth.
I smell your confidence.
It's an aura so bold,
you glow with it.
As I warm
your aura softens, fades,
and mine grows.
'Til entwined like serpents
you raise naked eyes to me...
And I smile, confidently.

Copyright Â© ShadowsCloud ... [ 2002-11-08 03:30:00]
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Re: Naked Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 06:23:49 AM AEST
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Isn't this just so true ... great poem ShadowsCloud ... love the way you write.

Re: Naked Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 06:53:15 AM AEST
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Super write, Cloud!! Loved it..
Jenni

Re: Naked Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 08:14:14 AM AEST
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This is beautiful, i enjoyed
this one, Great write.
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Naked Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 03:13:17 AM AEST
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Both becoming confident within each others ability to actually get someone we hold as special into this lovely scary position, that might just last a lifetime, this time please!

Lovely writing again Candice, and try not to lose hope while searching for your father, there's always a chance you may be pleasantly surprised, and if not then there's always that closure thing again!

With love
Dean:-)

Re: Naked Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 03:21:34 AM AEST
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Dean, thanks for your comments on this poem. As for my Father, I honestly think that what I really need is closure. You see my mom is getting married next year. And I am going to have a new step-father, and he is really a great guy. But because of my issues with my father, I can't let myself love my mom's fiance, because I am afraid of being hurt again. Even though I know that Carl (my mom's fiance) would never intentionally hurt me. But because of my father, I am just having a really hard time letting myself love someone in a position to love me like a father should. I really do need closure with my father so that I can move on with my life. Thanks again for your comment
ShadowsCloud

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