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Array ( [sid] => 63676 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => just like this [time] => 2004-09-14 05:08:20 [hometext] => i thought of this on (dont laugh) the toilet, so i wrote it into my mobile phone so i wouldnt forget it. [bodytext] => just like this to be the end of me
the shame of it all, what was it for?
the days the weeks the months the years
all this time i have feared
my life my death my pain and the rest.
what the hell was it for?
i havnt really lived at all.
the s#!t ive taken, the s#!t ive given
how does it end like this?
theres nothing i can do, i cant resist.
its a part of evolution, not a new revolution
this thing we call life, it can end in an instant.
from a gun, from a knife
im not giving up, i cant
i gotta live life to the fullest.
never give up, be honest,
to myself and others.
it will be fine i will let my heart shine
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just like this

Contributed by kritic_killer on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 05:08:20 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

just like this to be the end of me
the shame of it all, what was it for?
the days the weeks the months the years
all this time i have feared
my life my death my pain and the rest.
what the hell was it for?
i havnt really lived at all.
the s#!t ive taken, the s#!t ive given
how does it end like this?
theres nothing i can do, i cant resist.
its a part of evolution, not a new revolution
this thing we call life, it can end in an instant.
from a gun, from a knife
im not giving up, i cant
i gotta live life to the fullest.
never give up, be honest,
to myself and others.
it will be fine i will let my heart shine

Copyright © kritic_killer ... [ 2004-09-14 05:08:20]
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Re: just like this (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent_Composer on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:20:01 AM AEST
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What a place to come up with an emotional poem, the toilet, It was an awesome write, but I hope all your ideas dont come from sitting on the loo :D (JK)
Massive poem keep em coming.

~Silence~

Re: just like this (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 12:03:52 PM AEST
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lovely. i loved it so much...beautifully written

- Bethani -

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