Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 19:05:17 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 63669 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Disillusioned [time] => 2004-09-14 01:32:36 [hometext] => You Know Who You Are [bodytext] =>
I really though she loved me
but that is now in doubt
All the words of love and her actions
seems now to be a lie, throughout

This very beautiful lady
had captured me more, by the day
Everything about her
was special to me, in every way

To say that I am (Dis·il·lu·sioned)
and deep, into my heart
No words that I could write
could even begin to start

To tell you or her or anyone
the deep hurt that I feel
For me to have found out
her love was so unreal

Another hard lesson learned
they seem to come along
But life goes on , thank God
and I will remain strong

I wish her the best and happiness
everyday of her life
Loving her husband, as she does
and being his loving wife [comments] => 8 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Bruce [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

Disillusioned

Contributed by Bruce on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 01:32:36 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

I really though she loved me
but that is now in doubt
All the words of love and her actions
seems now to be a lie, throughout

This very beautiful lady
had captured me more, by the day
Everything about her
was special to me, in every way

To say that I am (Dis·il·lu·sioned)
and deep, into my heart
No words that I could write
could even begin to start

To tell you or her or anyone
the deep hurt that I feel
For me to have found out
her love was so unreal

Another hard lesson learned
they seem to come along
But life goes on , thank God
and I will remain strong

I wish her the best and happiness
everyday of her life
Loving her husband, as she does
and being his loving wife

Copyright Â© Bruce ... [ 2004-09-14 01:32:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Disillusioned (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:11:50 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I certenaly can relate from my past.
This write has much compassion, understanding and hurt.
I'm so sorry as I know how it feels to wake oneday and realize that your relationship was based n lies.
Sad write but a masterpeice with the extra pazzaz of good wishes.
Personlly it took much time for me not to want to kick his *** but being hurt so bad I did as u wish him best wishes 'cause he really needed good wishes.
luv, huggs, fith, hope, peace,
emy

Re: Disillusioned (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:17:15 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

man i am going thru the same thing with my gf. although she's not married. it seems everyday i love her more and more, she captures me in a way that i love. but alas i am afraid she is seeing someone on the side!!!
: (

Re: Disillusioned (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:27:28 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

woe ah what was that?
sorry to hear that.
good write.

Re: Disillusioned (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 03:10:30 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

life..it's really daily, huh? all I can say is we take the bitter with the sweet and hope the sweet takes the bitter taste away... why don't all of us who hurt get together..well mayber we already are. LOL. I died of heartbreak but I was too stubborn to fall over.

Re: Disillusioned (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 06:21:48 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Gads, I hate lessons in life!! They're always painful. (most of 'em anyways lol) Good write, Bruce. I hope you find someone and peace soon.
(((Bruce)))
Thumps ; 0)

Re: Disillusioned (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 11:05:06 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Awww here's a big hug *hugs* this is another moving write from you Bruce, it touched me
pixie xx

Re: Disillusioned (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 12:10:24 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Aww so much heartache and sorrow in your words. Can relate to this poem from in the past (long ago now) it hurts like hell but it does get better. Although you wont think so right now. Keep strong
A lovely yet sad write

Love Sweetangelukxxxx

Re: Disillusioned (User Rating: 1 )
by mylastwords on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 06:49:57 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

my last relationship was based on lies..he was cheating on me...im stil not ova it...he was my first love...maybe oneday ill find sum1 who'll care as much as you...
beautiful poem, Bruce!
xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com