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Array ( [sid] => 63645 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => . . . Untitled . . . [time] => 2004-09-13 21:43:32 [hometext] => If you could help me with a title that would be great ... thanks ... [bodytext] => Im sittin on a bus
wearin your sweater
thinkin of everything we used to be

ever since she came
into our friendship
its like im second best now

all our memories
just float away

its like you're a totally
different person now

I feel so replaced ...

I want so bad
to be the only girl
in your heart again

I dont think I'll ever be the only one again ...
I'm sorry I'm so selfish

once a best friend,
now a stranger

in the past couple of months
everything has changed so much

the best friends
that never fought
are now
endlessly at each others
throats

I keep thinking
that maybe everything
would be different
if she hadnt come along ...

I remember
when we would watch movies
together on my livingroom couch
and just being happy to be with each other

I remember
the way you were always there
for me when I needed you

I remember
you were my shoulder
to cry on when I thought everyone
had walked out on me

now its like we'll never
get the chance again ...

will things ever be the same again ? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 48 [informant] => monkey [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
. . . Untitled . . .

Contributed by monkey on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 09:43:32 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Im sittin on a bus
wearin your sweater
thinkin of everything we used to be

ever since she came
into our friendship
its like im second best now

all our memories
just float away

its like you're a totally
different person now

I feel so replaced ...

I want so bad
to be the only girl
in your heart again

I dont think I'll ever be the only one again ...
I'm sorry I'm so selfish

once a best friend,
now a stranger

in the past couple of months
everything has changed so much

the best friends
that never fought
are now
endlessly at each others
throats

I keep thinking
that maybe everything
would be different
if she hadnt come along ...

I remember
when we would watch movies
together on my livingroom couch
and just being happy to be with each other

I remember
the way you were always there
for me when I needed you

I remember
you were my shoulder
to cry on when I thought everyone
had walked out on me

now its like we'll never
get the chance again ...

will things ever be the same again ?




Copyright © monkey ... [ 2004-09-13 21:43:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: . . . Untitled . . . (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 03:42:57 AM AEST
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Wearin' Your Sweater ... cool poem.


Re: . . . Untitled . . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 11:06:58 PM AEST
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excellent write. ive gone through the same. things didnt turn back to the same for me ever again. for the title: to ever be...?




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