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Array ( [sid] => 63640 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Love You [time] => 2004-09-13 21:14:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm on the verge
of tears
as I think
about what we used to have

I remember
when I was the one
and only girl
in your heart

And eventually
someone new took my spot

I can't help
but let go of everything
I've held in my chest
for so long

Every second
of every night and day
you're never more
than a thought away

We've tried so hard
so many times
to rebuild
what we thought
was an unbreakable
friendship

Each time i think
i have a firm grasp
you slip away
again

Even though my heart
hurts like hell
I think I should give up

Its so hard to let you go

I miss what we had ...
I loved what we had ...
I'll never forget what we had ...
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 16 [informant] => monkey [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

I Love You

Contributed by monkey on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 09:14:29 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

I'm on the verge
of tears
as I think
about what we used to have

I remember
when I was the one
and only girl
in your heart

And eventually
someone new took my spot

I can't help
but let go of everything
I've held in my chest
for so long

Every second
of every night and day
you're never more
than a thought away

We've tried so hard
so many times
to rebuild
what we thought
was an unbreakable
friendship

Each time i think
i have a firm grasp
you slip away
again

Even though my heart
hurts like hell
I think I should give up

Its so hard to let you go

I miss what we had ...
I loved what we had ...
I'll never forget what we had ...

Copyright © monkey ... [ 2004-09-13 21:14:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by sheri on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 09:17:28 PM AEST
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I am sorry for your loss. Losing some one you care for is very traumatic. Keep your chin up. Nice write.

Re: I Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 10:04:57 AM AEST
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aww... so beautiful... hope this person comes back to you.

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