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Woken with a kiss
That seemed like you meant it
Thats why we call it "Bliss"
So I'll give you a single black rose
To express my dying love
And I would peel away a petal
For every person who said we were perfect
You would be left with the stem
Thorns and all; the equivalent of your soul
Which I would steal from you
And throw it on the ground
While screaming to the world
I'LL ALWAYS LOVE HER
As they laugh in my face
And kick me to the ground
I would sprinkle the rose petals
over my body; and sleep in disgrace [comments] => 7 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 48 [informant] => eyesxcriedxout1989 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Scream To The World

Contributed by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 08:29:32 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You, fading like a bad dream
Woken with a kiss
That seemed like you meant it
Thats why we call it "Bliss"
So I'll give you a single black rose
To express my dying love
And I would peel away a petal
For every person who said we were perfect
You would be left with the stem
Thorns and all; the equivalent of your soul
Which I would steal from you
And throw it on the ground
While screaming to the world
I'LL ALWAYS LOVE HER
As they laugh in my face
And kick me to the ground
I would sprinkle the rose petals
over my body; and sleep in disgrace

Copyright © eyesxcriedxout1989 ... [ 2004-09-13 20:29:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Scream To The World (User Rating: 1 )
by monophobic on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 08:49:24 PM AEST
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i wish my ex had cared at least half this much when we broke up. i think this is a great poem and u did a good job with making me see the emotion

Re: Scream To The World (User Rating: 1 )
by alyssakoren_03 on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 08:52:39 PM AEST
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i would not laugh at that it was full of emtion i can relate. we weren't actually a couple but we almost loved eachother then he hurt me. today i took him back again for the 4th time, when you love someone it seems as if you always wil until somehting better comes along.........you can e-mail me or w/e if you would like to talk not much i can help with but it's always good to know your not alone

Re: Scream To The World (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 10:12:07 PM AEST
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Mason this was outstanding, you are the very essence of a poet. i am glad to see you too have been touched by the muse!!! this was amazing and i can't wait to read more.

Re: Scream To The World (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent_Composer on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 12:31:42 AM AEST
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I see beauty within the poem, Sorrow bleeds from every word, Angers seed is there, a splintered heart crys a broken balad.......What I dont see is anything to laugh at in this poem!
Beautifully written and well worth the read.

~Silence~

Re: Scream To The World (User Rating: 1 )
by EmoDCgirl36 on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:45:56 PM AEST
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I'm sorry for the breakup and I'm sorry you both left with a heavy heart. But with every down pour comes a rainbow.

something like that...

Re: Scream To The World (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 09:24:29 PM AEST
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My dearest friend Mason, this is an enchanting, yet morbid first write! It struck a chord, my friend! I know how you feel... Me and my bf broke up on June 23rd... Oh well, over it and unto new flesh! You will always have her in your memories and heart, but you must forget her if it gives you pain thinking about the past... Believe me, I know it is hard to forget, but you move on, and the past shall stay in the past, not be aprat of the present... Good luck with this anguish, Mason! May your days be filled with happiness, and may you find the love you deserve! Many smiles going your way! You can talk to me about it if you wish... Forever your friend,

Fleur de sang (Stephy)

Re: Scream To The World (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 03:42:30 PM AEST
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Very impressive first submission.

Amazing how broken hearts
have made so many of us
poets.

--Mothy

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