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[sid] => 6363
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => SAVE WHO?
[time] => 2002-11-08 00:30:00
[hometext] => This is a poem about a friend that is trying to save her frined because she is a christian and believes that her frined is not saved because she won't be a christian also. The friend does not succeed in saving her first friend but then a second friend comes along and she was able to get her friend to be saved. Now she has hope that she will be able to keep saving her friends.
[bodytext] => There are two choices, I have to choose alone
Save my friend’s life or save my own We are on a cliff, I don’t like the height She won’t believe in what is right I have tried as hard as I can I showed her the way but she won’t understand Our friendship is failing now I don’t understand how She was my best friend I didn’t think that could end If I stuck by her side I would have died She pulled down my belief I could never find relief I was being defeated Things were getting heated I had to let go So I wasn’t pulled too low I have to give up now NO WAY! NO HOW! I can’t save her She begins to stir She stepped to the edge of the jagged cliffs I have to stop thinking of the “What Ifs” This is a decision I have to make alone Save her life or save my own She won’t be a christian because she is lost in her sin She steps over the edge and it is the end She is no longer my best friend I start to cry Now I want to die God didn’t let me win the victory I guess this is how it was meant to be I don’t understand and probably never will At least its not myself I want to kill Now it is time to forget That us two had ever met I break down and start to cry All I want now is to die I didn’t save you but I can’t save me I’m in trouble now that I can see I kneel down and start to pray That I won’t live another day Another person appears on the cliff now I want to help her but I don’t know how She’s approaching the cliffs steep side I can’t watch her die like my other friend died She is straying too far away I can’t wait another day What do I do now I need to know how I kneel and pray That she won’t lose her way God answers my pleas and now she sees I am ready to face the next fight Because I’m in God’s sight I may not always win But I will always be a christian With God’s help I’ll face my defeat Because the one girl I did meet I helped her to see So I know I hold the key I can save some friend So they won’t all die in the end One girl has lightened my hope So now I will be able to cope The defeat isn’t so bad Because the victory helps me to be glad The answer to my question “who do I save” The one girl I did save gave I may save some But only those who are willing to come [comments] => 3 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 31 [informant] => starynight0 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
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