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Leaving a hole where I used to be strong
But you build me up and rip me to shreds
So now I'll take whats left of these meds
And hope to God that I never awake
Because like you said, I was a big mistake
Unwanted then, even more today
I no longer want to do this
I don't want to stay
So I take them slowly, one by one
Until the bottle is empty and done
I finish this letter, close the seal
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Family?

Contributed by xemptydecemberx on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 04:17:07 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

This tension inside manifesting to long
Leaving a hole where I used to be strong
But you build me up and rip me to shreds
So now I'll take whats left of these meds
And hope to God that I never awake
Because like you said, I was a big mistake
Unwanted then, even more today
I no longer want to do this
I don't want to stay
So I take them slowly, one by one
Until the bottle is empty and done
I finish this letter, close the seal
This pain I will no longer have to feel

Copyright © xemptydecemberx ... [ 2004-09-13 16:17:07]
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Re: Family? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 06:20:42 PM AEST
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its a wonderful poem! and thank you for sharing it. but plz dont ever go thru with suicide. it may seem like theres nothing to live for, but if you just put your faith into God, He will save you. trust me, He has saved me. i used to feel that way alot too. God Bless. keep the faith.

Re: Family? (User Rating: 1 )
by monophobic on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 09:40:01 PM AEST
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i've taken a lot of pills. pills do nothing for me except temporarily replace the pain in my heart with pain in my stomache. and yes i truly believed and still sometimes do that its worth the trade. also my family life sucks, one of the reasons im so messed up. but your poem reminds me of the bad days. bad days that will make what couldhave been good days go bad. keep in mind who you are and that you are the only person you can control and you can't be responsible for other's harsh words or actions. the thought helps me at times. maybe it will for you too

Re: Family? (User Rating: 1 )
by mylastwords on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 10:04:57 PM AEST
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this is a really beautiful poem. Thanks 4 sharin it. im pretty *****d up rite now n poetry n songs give me that release. so thanku 4 letting me read this poem. Also, you're not alone...there r many ppl who feel like you...obviously not exactly tha same coz no1 can no exactly what the other is feeling, but tha same sort of pain...i feel that pain...

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