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Array ( [sid] => 63607 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Last Suicide [time] => 2004-09-13 16:14:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She runs in her room and locks the door
The tears in her eyes start to pour
Her mind is made up, she can't turn back
Because today it's courage she'll lack
Courage to stay, to work things out
But this will be better, without a doubt
She clutches the blade in her closed fist
And drives it inside of her wrist
Not minding the veins, or even the bone
She can't live here, not alone
She slices and slices until theres no pain
She swears this was the only thing keeping her sane
She's threatened to take her life a few times before
But no one believes her, not anymore
Maybe her cutting is a helpless cry
That she doesn't wanna always feel like she has to die
But ***** it, its over, there will be no more
This is the last time she'll ever walk out that door
Her mind is racing as her fingers grow weak
The pain is to much now, she can hardly speak
She doesn't bother catching the blood that falls
Because everyone thought she wouldn't have the balls
To start cutting again, and not live to heal
This is the last suicide she'll ever have to feel [comments] => 6 [counter] => 309 [topic] => 36 [informant] => xemptydecemberx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Last Suicide

Contributed by xemptydecemberx on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 04:14:08 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



She runs in her room and locks the door
The tears in her eyes start to pour
Her mind is made up, she can't turn back
Because today it's courage she'll lack
Courage to stay, to work things out
But this will be better, without a doubt
She clutches the blade in her closed fist
And drives it inside of her wrist
Not minding the veins, or even the bone
She can't live here, not alone
She slices and slices until theres no pain
She swears this was the only thing keeping her sane
She's threatened to take her life a few times before
But no one believes her, not anymore
Maybe her cutting is a helpless cry
That she doesn't wanna always feel like she has to die
But ***** it, its over, there will be no more
This is the last time she'll ever walk out that door
Her mind is racing as her fingers grow weak
The pain is to much now, she can hardly speak
She doesn't bother catching the blood that falls
Because everyone thought she wouldn't have the balls
To start cutting again, and not live to heal
This is the last suicide she'll ever have to feel




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Re: Last Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 05:18:13 PM AEST
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very powerful, especially the last line.. good write *


Re: Last Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 06:13:22 PM AEST
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this is such an awesome poem!! and it really made me think. its like i could feel what she was going thru. i love it! i cant wait to read another of your poems!! keep writing!!!!


Re: Last Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 06:13:23 PM AEST
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this is such an awesome poem!! and it really made me think. its like i could feel what she was going thru. i love it! i cant wait to read another of your poems!! keep writing!!!!


Re: Last Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by mylastwords on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 10:08:40 PM AEST
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this is a strong poem. i love it...i feel like i know what its like when ppl dont believe you have the guts to do sumthin. please keep writing, you're a beautiful writer...


Re: Last Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 11:57:37 AM AEST
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wow!!!
very, very good work here!
i love it!!!
it's superb, in many ways. AMAZING!

the first to lines really pulled me in to read more, they capured me in an instant...!
and i also the the part where you've wrote "She doesn't bother catching the blood that falls
Because everyone thought she wouldn't have the balls" that's excellent there!
cheesh... you've left me speechless for what more to say!


Re: Last Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by HERO on Thursday, 19th March 2009 @ 11:17:05 AM AEST
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Wow, you've really captured the scary feeling of suicidial intentions, and rhymed it too! I'm very impressed.

-HERO




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