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Array ( [sid] => 63553 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => From the Void [time] => 2004-09-13 02:23:24 [hometext] => Sequel to 'From the Abyss' and 'From the Pit' [bodytext] => As the days cover the nights
And the cloughs swallow the heights
Then my world turns as I please
In the darkness I'm at ease

How I yearn to need no breath
Give them all the kiss of death
No more dawns to scrape my soul
I hide deeper in my hole

Dig on deeper where dark lies
Hear yet louder these stretched cries
There's no fire in Mount Doom
Dig on deeper for my tomb

Silent creams as I'm reborn
Tearing shrieks as I am torn
Swept away, I leave behind
The fading pieces of my mind

Tell me why is it so cold?
And so dark, so black I feel
This numb emptiness none can heal
From the barren soul I sold [comments] => 8 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Hurretje [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 35 [ratings] => 7 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

From the Void

Contributed by Hurretje on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 02:23:24 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

As the days cover the nights
And the cloughs swallow the heights
Then my world turns as I please
In the darkness I'm at ease

How I yearn to need no breath
Give them all the kiss of death
No more dawns to scrape my soul
I hide deeper in my hole

Dig on deeper where dark lies
Hear yet louder these stretched cries
There's no fire in Mount Doom
Dig on deeper for my tomb

Silent creams as I'm reborn
Tearing shrieks as I am torn
Swept away, I leave behind
The fading pieces of my mind

Tell me why is it so cold?
And so dark, so black I feel
This numb emptiness none can heal
From the barren soul I sold

Copyright © Hurretje ... [ 2004-09-13 02:23:24]
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Re: From the Void (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 02:26:14 AM AEST
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Awesome writing!
luv, hugs,
emy

Re: From the Void (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 03:37:45 AM AEST
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Congratulations Hur this is a wonderful piece of perhaps who knows death and reincarnation. Somewhat frightening but I think that was your point to be made. 5/5 all the best from bernard.

Re: From the Void (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 07:02:56 AM AEST
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Wow that is deep and powerful write.
It is so great that you can write it down like that.Great job..

Re: From the Void (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 09:21:23 AM AEST
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this was awesome.
it was easy reading and sorta dark. really deep and cool.
great write. i very much enjoyed it.
5 stars
Arden

Re: From the Void (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 09:21:47 AM AEST
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a very well written piece in the triology.

wildejohnny.

Re: From the Void (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:36:03 AM AEST
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awesome..its a wonderful work. venkat

Re: From the Void (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent_Composer on Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 06:24:44 AM AEST
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And again you have caught my imagination with your talent, the words of this poem have a lingering affect, making me wonder what next is instore.
Beautifully written as what I have so far is.

~Silence~

Re: From the Void (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 01:27:13 AM AEST
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There's a lot of grief to this. A very fine portrayal of feelings that must hurt, indeed.

God bless.

Andrew

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